I really can't find a single flaw in this. I loved everything about it! The animation was smooth and good, I love the noir color scheme and feel, and the music was wonderful. This deserves to be front paged. Keep up the amazing work! :)
I really can't find a single flaw in this. I loved everything about it! The animation was smooth and good, I love the noir color scheme and feel, and the music was wonderful. This deserves to be front paged. Keep up the amazing work! :)
Oh wow, thank you! I appreciate it
Honestly one of the best holiday submissions of the year. It started off rather slow, but it just got better from there. Love the action scenes, and Haris has a pretty good character design. Nice job mate!
thank you kindly
Pretty cute submission. And a Happy New Year to you too. :)
aww ty :-o
There is something enjoyable about listening to these two talk. A moon could crash into Clocktown, and I'd rather check in to see what these guys have to say. Pretty impressive art btw.
thats exactly what i was going for while making these insane little characters >:D this means a lot!
My one nitpick is that there could've been more expression to the faces, but aside from that this was pretty enjoyable. And a pretty great christmas present in fact. Loved the music, and the animation to go with it. Nice! :)
I remember me and my pals did joke about Jon having a completely stone face, but yeah nermal was intended to have facial expressions and I just kinda fuckin forget about it towards the end
Not bad, but there was some issues. First of all, the audio started off good, but half way though it got quiet. I'm not sure what happened, but if you have Audacity use it to amplify the quiet voices. Speaking of voices, I recommend putting a bit more emotion into it. The voice acting can be pretty stale at points. With all that said, I like the art in this. It's passable and it's clear you got some talent in drawing. And the animation was pretty good too. It seems like a series I can get into, and I hope you keep it up. Good luck mate!
Thank you for the feedback
For something that was made in only a week, this was pretty impressive. It was pretty funny at points, especially the stuff with the elf lol. The animation wasn't anything spectacular, but it was made in only a week so I'm not surprised. Not to mention that was only a nitpick. The video in general was hilarious, and I'm glad I watched it. Keep up the good work! :)
Thanks for the feedback and the kind words, glad you enjoyed it!
Pretty nice for an intro. Not much else to say except keep up the good work!
Thank you
I'll give you some credit since this seems to be your 1st animation (as far as I know), but we got some problems here. The voice acting really needs to be improved on. I recommend you getting what's called Audacity. It's a free audio program that will help amplify your voices so they don't seem quiet, and it can get rid of those air buffs using Noise Removal. As for the overall art in general, that also needs to be really improved on. Granted everyone has their own opinions on what makes good art, but maybe some legit backgrounds would be nice for your animations instead of having one-colored backgrounds. And yeah, practice drawing your characters more because practice makes perfect. I know others may hate on you for this, but I hope that you get better in the future. I'm sure you have a lot more talent than you realized, it just needs to be improved on. Good luck!
Thanks I'll try the app out
Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!
Age 28, Male
Animator
United States
Joined on 6/13/14