ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Communal Milk]

My biggest issue is that the audio was really quiet. If you don't have Audacity, it can help amplify the voice acting here. Everything to do with the animation and art was passable. The writing was awkward in a very good humorous way. Like I was not expecting that ending. Pretty damn gross lmao! But yeah, keep up the good work.

CommunalMilk responds:

Thanks for the feedback man, I appreciate it, the sound seems a normal level to me but I can always change that if that’s a common problem people are having with it. Thanks for letting me know 😁

[Deep Rock Galactic Gunner]

I recommend you put in some sound effects for that gatling gun. It'd make the submission a bit more engaging.

Irish-John101 responds:

Dumb question: would a re-upload with sound be allowed? Or would they consider that spam/reposting or otherwise frown upon that?

["worst she can say is no"]

I adore it when animation and live action mashes together so well. Giving me major Roger Rabbit vibes lol. But yeah, it was pretty hilarious and I love your raccoon character design. I'm sure even John R. Black would've loved your animation here lmao. Keep up the amazing work! :)

Raccatoons responds:

Thank you Shae I super appreciate your feedback! Yeah I love mixing live action and animation! I did another one like this called "The Maskless Raccoon" a few months ago, you might wanna check that out as well if you liked this! That one's even more like Who Framed Roger Rabbit haha. Glad you liked!

[A Box in an Ocean]

I can tell you're new in general, so I'll give you some advice. Obviously you need to put in alot more animation to your submissions. This felt more like a slideshow than anything else. Also you definitely need other voice actors to help you out. Luckily Newgrounds is full of them, so all you got to do is ask. I recognize potential when I see it, so just keep on practicing and you'll be making great toons in the future. Good luck!

LeoShortNose responds:

Hey! Ummmm, I've been Making Animations since 2019 (Not on Newgrounds), and I Find Animating at 24 FPS Difficult, I also understand that I Need more Voice Actors rather then Just Myself, However I Right ALL of my Scripts in the Notes App

Also Thanks for the Encouragement, I Don't get a Lot of That stuff, especially since on Literally Every Video of Mine (YouTube) I get a Dislike from my Brother

Thanks for Your Feedback!

[Grand Master's Den]

Felt like something I'd see on Adult Swim. Very weird and creative art style, complete with very odd but funny humor. Made me laugh a few times lol. Keep up the good work! :)

CharlieEmerson responds:

Appreciate the kind words! Thank you! :)

[Shovel Knight Smash Amiibo concept]

Looks pretty neat! Though I'd recommend putting this in the art portal (assuming if you can with blender). But still, nice piece of art!

raptorbricks responds:

Thanks!

I would've prefered to put this in the Art Portal, though there isn't really a good way to properly showcase 3D stuff there without sacraficing quality (GIF being the only animated option). I have posted a still version to the Art Portal, but that unfortunatly doesn't show it off as well as a video does.

[Somewhere Other: Gentle Confrontation]

Everything about this was a delight. I specially loved the color scheme in this. It has a sort of rough texture that makes the whole thing feel more down to earth. And the overall art felt like something out of a story book. And a special praise for the voice actors. They sounded believable in this. Hope this makes it to front page. Keep up the amazing work! :)

cecameron responds:

Thank you!

[WET ASS PRESIDENT]

Is meatcanyon your inspiration? Because I was getting vibes from this (no pun intended lol). But yeah, pretty hilarious lol. Keep up the great work! :)

minscay responds:

Oh for sure, along with many other animators such as oney & psychicpebbles. I appreciate the support!

[Junk Yard]

It's ok for what it is, though I do got some issues with it. I think my biggest problem is that it could be pretty silent at points when it shouldn't be. There were times where there was no sound effects when something happened. Like at around 2:51 when someone busted through the door, there was no sound. And that's just one example. Make sure there is always some kind of audio throughout the video. Speaking of audio, some of the voice acting could've been amplified a bit. If you don't know about Audacity, I strongly recommend it. It can help out with that issue. And lastly this is just my opinion, but the background art could be better. Especially with the outside scenes. A little more detail wouldn't hurt. The animation itself is alright and it's pretty serviceable. You got some talent obviously, it just needs to improve a bit. I wish you the best of luck!

SkittleWaffle responds:

Thank you for your feedback! Next time I will keep these points in mind.