Right now it's not much, but this honestly just has so much potential I have to follow you. You got some basic but cute character designs, and the humor is awkward in a good way. Hope to see this become a legit series. ;)
Right now it's not much, but this honestly just has so much potential I have to follow you. You got some basic but cute character designs, and the humor is awkward in a good way. Hope to see this become a legit series. ;)
I do plan to make it into a legit series and I'm glad you think it has much potential!
A very simple but effective piece of work. Loved the animation and character design. This felt like a short that you'd see on Nicktoons or something. Keep up the good work! :)
Thank you dude! That's so nice!
I can't speak for everyone here, but this was hitting nostalgia territory for me lol. This was such a delight. And I'm a real sucker for animations that cross 2D and 3D together. Also yeah those 3D backgrounds were pretty cute and creative. My only nitpick is that sometimes a scene can drag for too long when it probably could've been cut. While some people may find that boring, I found it wholesome. The point is that I loved this submission. Keep up the great work! :)
Wow, thank you! And yeah, you're probably right about some scenes being too long, I haven't really made a big animation like this before so I'm still figuring out pacing and stuff.
Ok that was actually kinda funny lol. It's nothing amazing, but it did put a smile on my face. Just keep on practicing and making your small projects. One day you could be making some big hilarious stuff. Good luck! :)
Thank you! I know, It's just a few hours of work :)
My only "criticism" is that there wasn't much animation in this, but obviously it was a school project so I can't be too hard on it. Though my legit nitpick is maybe have some background music going on. Having music alone can engage your audience some. But yeah, I love everything else. Love your art and character designs. Perfects tools to make some great submissions. Keep up the good work! :)
Thank you, I really appreciate the feedback! :) Will consider BGM in the future but iunno how I wanna go about it just yet, and I def wanna put more time into the actual animation of future works. ThAnk you again, dog bless
For a school project this was pretty good. The art was the best part about it imo. You got fantastic drawing skills. Also the animation was pretty smooth for the most part. Hope you got an A with this lol. Though if I was you, I would've put in some sound effects or music. Would've made the submission a little bit more engaging. But it's great for what it is. Keep up the good work!
Thanks man, I was trying with audio and music recently, however I couldn't find anything good, nor do I have the knowledge at sound engineering. Luckily I am not getting grades on audio, thanks for your kind comments and advice man!
Feels like something off Stickpage; a very nostalgic feel. That was pretty hilarious lol. It's nothing amazing, but it made me smile. Keep up the good work! :)
Btw, what did the original submission look like? You got me curious.
It's most likely the same, just some animations tweaks, a MP4 version, and a better replay/links screen as well as a bonus scene later and you got yourself the unblammed version. Just trying to make people happy :] Glad you enjoyed :D
The best animation I've seen in years. Keep up the amazing work dude! :D
aw shucks what can i say
My only criticism is that the submission could've went a bit slower, just to really let the drama impact the audience. But yeah, I love what you have here. Wasn't even in a linear perspective, but with two scenarios playing back to back. And you could tell quick what happened despite the animation going too fast. Keep up the good work!
thank you <3, yeah most people have been telling me it goes by too fast so I'm working on a slower version rn. Thanks for the critique :)
Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!
Age 29, Male
Animator
United States
Joined on 6/13/14