Pretty basic and funny. Not to mention relatable as someone who plays the game lol. But yeah, everything was on point with this. Keep up the good work! ;)
Pretty basic and funny. Not to mention relatable as someone who plays the game lol. But yeah, everything was on point with this. Keep up the good work! ;)
Thank you very much!
My only "complaint" is that I have no idea what happened, but you've already explained in your description. Everything about this was pretty great. The animation, art, color, etc was all good. Not to mention the 2nd short was pretty hilarious I think. Keep up the good work! :P
Thank you for the kind words!!! Ill be going more plot driven in the future :)
Normally I'm not a fan of stock images being used, but obviously a lot of work was put into this. There were some pretty funny moments in this, like with that Mario cameo. Even the voice acting made me chuckle at times. Though at the same time some of the voice acting could've been amplified just a bit, but this is just a minor nitpick. I think it was enjoyable. Keep up the good work! ;)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
The one nitpick I have is that the voice acting isn't really consistent. At times we go from very soft talking to blowing out your ears. If you don't have it, I recommend Audacity. It can help amplify the quiet lines you got. Aside from this, this was pretty enjoyable. I do love me some Eddsworld-inspired submissions, and this gave me just what I wanted. Hope to see another episode of this! :)
i do have audacity, but not only did i switch headphones halfway through, going between flash and audacity can be a chore, but thanks for watching nonetheless!
Pretty impressive! I imagine it's not easy trying to do 3D animations in general, but I love how creative it looks. It feels like on of those old 90s 3D cartoons. Keep up the good work!
thanks, i will!
Honestly one of the best stick animations I've seen in a while. I really had no problems with anything in this. I wanna ask though, do you play Moonlighter? Because the plot here reminded me of that game exactly. Really fun game btw. Also, you get extra points for Undertale music. lol
Thanks a TON man! I really appreciate that. I have never played Moonlighter before but I'll check it out! Looool, Undertale has some great music!
Thought I drop by to leave a rating. :)
oh thank you so much
While the animation is pretty fluid and the artwork is pretty good in my opinion, this has some nitpicks with it. Any piece of audio would be nice to have instead of leaving it just silent. It would help engage your viewers more. Also something like this may be better off on your dumping grounds instead of submitting it under judgement. Under judgement is more for legit, really well-made projects instead of just loops. The overall submission is decent for what it is. You just need to be more careful on what you submit. Just throwing out some tips here. Good luck!
Thanks for the feedback ShaeGuy! Yes your definetly right about the audio (or lack of it!). I actually started gathering some sounds for this but realised i wouldn't have had enough to make the deadline. Saying that there's no reason i couldn't have added it after for this upload. Good point. Thanks for the heads up, I'm not on this site a hell of alot (the amount of content i have reflects that!) So I tend to default to submitting it regularly. I will try to be more specific in which section of the site to upload to in future.
Thanks again!
From the looks of it, you have plenty of talent and potential. Love your animations, artwork, line work, color scheme, etc. Hope you get hired Evan. :)
Cheers, ShaeGuy!
Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!
Age 28, Male
Animator
United States
Joined on 6/13/14