ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[OAK: Episode One]

You have an interesting thing going on here, but the whole submission felt a bit lackluster. Now the art itself was the best part about this video, you definitely has some drawing skills. However, the animation was really hit and miss. The walk cycles in this were pretty great, but there should definitely be mouth movements. You don't really have to lip sync, but just have the mouths move up and down like an anime or something. Another thing is that there should be more audio in this than just the voice acting. Either have some music playing in the background, or maybe outdoor sounds. Anything just to fill the void. Speaking of voice acting, make sure all the lines are amplified. Some of your voice actors were really quiet compared to others. If you don't have Audacity, I strongly recommend it. It's free and it'll help improve your lines a lot. You have potential with this, it just needs to be improved on. Good luck!

TawnyLight responds:

Hi! Thanks for your feedback! I currently have 3 episodes made, and episode 3 is edited, since that is when I was able to hire an editor!

[Clanky the Wise]

So you take drawing requests? That's nice man. :)

Barnhouse responds:

Yes I do! And I am building all my assets to launch my twitch show very soon.

[another friday thing]

I did not see that coming at all lmfao! Made me laugh hard I'll admit XD. Keep up the good work!

Kritts responds:

thank you lol

[Lego and the sticky cookie(ep3)]

Pretty good stop motion going on here. Pretty fluid as it should be. As for the question, she may face off her greatest enemy yet: Karen. lol

KinkaBrick responds:

I don’t getting it

[FNF Jam entry]

The longer I was watching this, the better it got! And it was really impressive for something that was made with flipaclip since most submissions using that program are mediocre at best. The animation here was very energetic along with the music, and your art in general ranges from cute to beautiful. This was great work, and I'd love to see more from ya. Keep up the amazing work! :)

Saobion responds:

THANK YOU SO MUCH!! I've been using Flipaclip for years now, but it's been a while since I animated something seriously due to me using my phone to animate and gives me bad hand cramps haha. I did my best not to loop it since it would look boring and make it more interesting in animating little things. If I had more time, it would of been much more different. Thank you so much for your comment!! It really made my day

[ARE YOU READY TO LEAVE LEGO ISLAND?!?!]

If this was made using Flash or something similar, there was no need to use wevideo. If you don't have Swivel, I recommend using it. It's a free Newgrounds video player that is easy to use. Sorry, but recording your animation with white bars out and your cursor moving around really hurts the quality of this submission. Just try to improve on that aspect okay.

GuilAnimates responds:

i know but i lost my adobe animate so i have to use scratch :(

[stupid little creature falls on its face]

That's me when I try to go to work at night lol. But yeah, loved the 3D textures in this. You got some talent in that department, and I'd love to see more from you. Keep up the great work! :)

redshibe responds:

thanks so much!

[Night Shisters (Aniamtic]

Would this ever be fully animated? Because yeah this was really promising. I did love your sketches and character designs. If not, at least it's a good concept. You got some talent, and I'd love to see it explored. Good luck out there! :)

WorkingApe responds:

Thank you! A good chunk of the credit though should be given to my producer and co-board artist Katie, she was such an essential part to bringing this to life.