ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic Kills Metal Sonic for Animal Abuse]

I do like the animation and linework here. It seems smooth and detailed, but it also feels unfinished. If this is unfinished, I wouldn't recommend posting it under judgement. Wait until everything is polished and good. Also audio of any kind would really help this out. You got some talent here, it just needs to be improved on. Good luck!

ZykicoBeast responds:

It's finished!! Thanks for the feedback.

[The Senses Song: 300 Sub Special Edition]

The animation is actually decent here, but I'd recommend you get a better animation program like Flash 8. It'd help smooth the outlines so it doesn't look so rushed. Speaking of which, you should have mouth movements here. It doesn't have to be perfectly lip synced, the mouths just need to move up and down. And lastly you should make legit backgrounds. It doesn't have to be amazing either, but it'd be better than having single colored backgrounds. You got some talent here, it just needs to be improved on. Good luck!

littleMAHER1 responds:

I will say that I animated this on a phone which explains why it looks rushed
I am looking for a proper animation program now that I got a computer
the background was a choice because in the orignal video there is not really a background but I will keep that in mind
The mouth movement I am on the fence on tho but I will think about it
thanks for you're constructive criticism I will keep all of this in mind!

[StickSchool Episode 4: Masterpiece Theif]

I can tell you're new so I'll give you some credit. You seem to have some skill, but I'd recommend a better animation program to use. There were so many animation errors in this that I don't even really need to explain as it's pretty obvious when you watch this. The best I can say for now is keep on practicing and improving. You got some potential that is waiting to burst out and amaze everyone here. Good luck!

StickSchoolStudios responds:

thanks, I use FlipaClip so sometimes it glitches. Most recent episodes should be better

[Cosmic Stars and Beyond the Freeway]

I can see a lot of effort was put into this. I think my favorite thing was the 3D spaceship you were using. I love it when 3D can mix well with 2D content lol. Also some of the character designs were pretty creative, particularly the alien designs. Hope to see this continue! :)

HarisTheGodBear responds:

Thank you kindly good sir

[Stanpai Visual Character Demo]

Got plenty of talent mate! Especially love your "Pepe le Pew" accent in your 1st voice over. Hope you get plenty of work in the near future. :)

Stanpai responds:

Thank you!

[PJ Mouse In: Temple Of Cheese]

My favorite thing is the use of colors for the backgrounds. You clearly know a lot about color schemes to set the mood for different scenes lol. Though the animation can feel pretty stiff at points, so I recommend more movements for PJ. But yeah I do love seeing original content trying to make it into the light. Hope PJ gets more attention! xD

N8Productions responds:

Thanks man, yeah I’ve been working on more in depth backgrounds lately and trying to convey a mysterious tone. Also I definitely understand about the stiffness, PJs design is so simple that Strangely it’s hard to move him in certain ways, but I’m still figuring out new forms of motion for him that will be seen in his upcoming shorts! Thanks for watching and for the advice, more shorts are on the way! -Nate

[spider-man opening]

It's pretty good. While I think the animation could've been smoother, I can tell a lot of work was put into this. Not bad for a stickman pivot animation. Keep up the good work!

stageactstudios responds:

i made it in sticknodes. thanks

[Desire]

Not much to say except perfection! Bet your arms were sore after moving around the clay figures for so long lol. Hope to see this on front page. Keep up the amazing work! :)

PencilKiller responds:

Ahh that would be a dream come true..

[The Communal Milk]

My biggest issue is that the audio was really quiet. If you don't have Audacity, it can help amplify the voice acting here. Everything to do with the animation and art was passable. The writing was awkward in a very good humorous way. Like I was not expecting that ending. Pretty damn gross lmao! But yeah, keep up the good work.

CommunalMilk responds:

Thanks for the feedback man, I appreciate it, the sound seems a normal level to me but I can always change that if that’s a common problem people are having with it. Thanks for letting me know 😁