ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pony Grumps Animatic]

You know, it's never really a good idea to post unfinished animation on here. On Newgrounds, most people would rather want to watch movie fully finished. So posting unfinished movies will make you loose like 3 stars alone. I also recommend Audacity for the audio quality, and Swivel for the looping. Both programs are free to get, so you can improve on animation quality. Just try to improve. Good luck!

ChanceTheBrony responds:

Thank you, ShaeGuy. That was very helpful.

[Over 9000 Views Yay]

The only problem with this movie is that it's on loop. I'd recommend Swivel so this will be on a video player. Otherwise, this is ok. Not the best, but it seems legit.

Agent64 responds:

Thanks! I would use Swivel, but I prefer uploading things to NewGrounds as swfs. Not sure why, though.

[TheEpicAdventure of Nico]

The only nitpick I have is that some of the voice acting could've been louder. Otherwise, this is pretty good and pretty funny. Keep it up! :)

Theuzielceron responds:

Thanks, will try to keep improving

[A True Story]

Wtf? lmfao XD

TMJBtv responds:

I....I really wish I knew....

[Mk Vs Db Z Outworld Missi]

Where do I start:

1. The animation is too choppy. It really needs work.

2. Alot of the backgrounds were small to the point of seeing white on the sides. Learn to stretch out the backgrounds.

3. Make sure the dialogue is in the camera shots at all times. Sometimes the words are cut off, so you don't know what they're saying.

4. I'd recommend Swivel so your animation is not on loop.

Hope you read this and take my advice.

danielsdominick91 responds:

I'm not done the next part yet,but I'm working on it

[Toilet Paper]

You can't have the title and description in english, and the video in another language. Either keep it in 1 language, or use both at the same time.

By the way at 00:06, you got some tears that shouldn't be there.

PolloChidoman responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

[Story Time with Saathoff]

Normally I don't like it when Live-Action is on Newgrounds, but it really works here. Mostly because of the animation that's in it, not to mention camera quality is really great. Also this was pretty funny. Keep making more. :)

Bingleheimer responds:

Yeah I wasn't sure how Newgrounds would take the live-action but I haven't uploaded anything in awhile so thought it was worth a try! Thanks for the feedback and I mostly definitely will continue to animate as that will be my future job. haha :)