ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mk Vs Db Z Outworld Missi]

Where do I start:

1. The animation is too choppy. It really needs work.

2. Alot of the backgrounds were small to the point of seeing white on the sides. Learn to stretch out the backgrounds.

3. Make sure the dialogue is in the camera shots at all times. Sometimes the words are cut off, so you don't know what they're saying.

4. I'd recommend Swivel so your animation is not on loop.

Hope you read this and take my advice.

danielsdominick91 responds:

I'm not done the next part yet,but I'm working on it

[Toilet Paper]

You can't have the title and description in english, and the video in another language. Either keep it in 1 language, or use both at the same time.

By the way at 00:06, you got some tears that shouldn't be there.

PolloChidoman responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

[Story Time with Saathoff]

Normally I don't like it when Live-Action is on Newgrounds, but it really works here. Mostly because of the animation that's in it, not to mention camera quality is really great. Also this was pretty funny. Keep making more. :)

Bingleheimer responds:

Yeah I wasn't sure how Newgrounds would take the live-action but I haven't uploaded anything in awhile so thought it was worth a try! Thanks for the feedback and I mostly definitely will continue to animate as that will be my future job. haha :)

[Poopsicle Sticks]

Well atleast the animation is pretty good. Though this could have used some colors, better voice acting, and I'd recommend Swivel so the animation is not on loop. It's got some good quality, it just needed more work to it. Keep it up!

Agent64 responds:

Thanks!

[Caterpie Vs Weedle]

Looks pretty nice. Not to mention pretty funny.

Evy-Devy responds:

Thanks! (Audio credit goes to Bloocerix)

[BIRTHDAY]

Pretty nice. Also, happy birthday. :)

CalebJordan360 responds:

Thank youu!

[Assassin's Creed ITS]

Pretty decent. I like it.

StefAnimator responds:

Thanks mate :)

[winter fairy]

Well the animation could've been better, though the color scheme is nice. Just try harder next time. Good luck!

flashmakeit responds:

I will try harder next time because I have a plan. Thanks for the luck and viewing this movie.