The only problem with this movie is that it's on loop. I'd recommend Swivel so this will be on a video player. Otherwise, this is ok. Not the best, but it seems legit.
The only problem with this movie is that it's on loop. I'd recommend Swivel so this will be on a video player. Otherwise, this is ok. Not the best, but it seems legit.
Thanks! I would use Swivel, but I prefer uploading things to NewGrounds as swfs. Not sure why, though.
The only nitpick I have is that some of the voice acting could've been louder. Otherwise, this is pretty good and pretty funny. Keep it up! :)
Thanks, will try to keep improving
Wtf? lmfao XD
I....I really wish I knew....
Where do I start:
1. The animation is too choppy. It really needs work.
2. Alot of the backgrounds were small to the point of seeing white on the sides. Learn to stretch out the backgrounds.
3. Make sure the dialogue is in the camera shots at all times. Sometimes the words are cut off, so you don't know what they're saying.
4. I'd recommend Swivel so your animation is not on loop.
Hope you read this and take my advice.
I'm not done the next part yet,but I'm working on it
You can't have the title and description in english, and the video in another language. Either keep it in 1 language, or use both at the same time.
By the way at 00:06, you got some tears that shouldn't be there.
Thanks for the feedback!
Normally I don't like it when Live-Action is on Newgrounds, but it really works here. Mostly because of the animation that's in it, not to mention camera quality is really great. Also this was pretty funny. Keep making more. :)
Yeah I wasn't sure how Newgrounds would take the live-action but I haven't uploaded anything in awhile so thought it was worth a try! Thanks for the feedback and I mostly definitely will continue to animate as that will be my future job. haha :)
Well atleast the animation is pretty good. Though this could have used some colors, better voice acting, and I'd recommend Swivel so the animation is not on loop. It's got some good quality, it just needed more work to it. Keep it up!
Thanks!
Looks pretty nice. Not to mention pretty funny.
Thanks! (Audio credit goes to Bloocerix)
Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!
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