ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Goku VS Vegeta]

Well this was pretty decent for a first animation, but there are some problems.
1. In some scenes, their was white showing on the edges of backgrounds. You should try to stretch out backgrounds a bit more.
2. It's kinda weird to have voices in this and yet still have text boxes. I'd recommend sticking with only one of them.
3. At 00:23, If that is suppose to be smoke, then you need to learn how to make it fade out instead of having it just stick there for the rest of the video.
4. There could be more animation in the sprites.

Just keep on trying, and you'll be a great animator. Good luck!

DDO-Productions responds:

Thanks!

[Wooden Sword]

I love the animation style. And the music is very nice to listen. Hope you make more like this. :)

P4DDDY responds:

Thanks! I do have a number of projects lined up :)

[Wir sind Jeck]

This was alright, though this should have been in the Audio section of Newgrounds instead of here. Just saying.

Damokles responds:

Well, I didn't sing, nor did I play any instrument, I just made the animation, so the song is not really my creation.

[War]

I know this is just a school project, but at around 00:25 the guns disappear for half a second. Just be careful with small problems like that next time.

CanadaGDP responds:

Ah, I didn't catch that originally! Thank you!

[Fruity Pebbles]

I would talk about the problems with this movie, but you seem to know the problems yourself judging by your Author comment. But I will say it's never a good idea to ask people to 5 star your movie, especially with problems in it. It'll make people give you a low rating if not a blam rating. Just be careful with what you say next time and also try to improve. Good luck!

ProfMonkey responds:

Honestly, thanks. I'm pretty new to newgrounds so anything helps.

[Follow The Spiders]

It's no wonder you got front page. This was amazing work. Really hope you make more. Keep it up! :)

CalebJordan360 responds:

Thanks man! :'DD

[Chris And David 2| Halo!]

Where do I start. You really need to stretch out backgrounds because you can see white in half of them. The art work really needs more effort put into it, not to mention the animation. Although the artwork for the Halo suits and guns are pretty legit, but that is not enough to give this a good rating. But seeing how you at least tried to make a legit movie, I'll give you 2/5. Just try harder next time. Good luck!

MicroMashons responds:

I just noticed that the white background is not supposed to happen. I'm trying to fix it now. I'm changing the file to an mp4.