ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[STH: Chaos Within teaser]

It was alright for a teaser though there should have been more to it than just the emerald. Still, can't wait to see the series.

CosmicTornado responds:

I'm planning on making a second teaser. One that shows off more than this, but not too much. I only wanted to show the emerald for this because it tells you that the Chaos Emeralds somehow came into the Mushroom Kingdom.

[Pony Grumps Animatic]

You know, it's never really a good idea to post unfinished animation on here. On Newgrounds, most people would rather want to watch movie fully finished. So posting unfinished movies will make you loose like 3 stars alone. I also recommend Audacity for the audio quality, and Swivel for the looping. Both programs are free to get, so you can improve on animation quality. Just try to improve. Good luck!

ChanceTheBrony responds:

Thank you, ShaeGuy. That was very helpful.

[IMPROV]

The only nitpick with this is that the animation is on loop. I'd recommend Swivel. Otherwise, this is pretty funny. lmao

SneakySneeze responds:

alright thanks!:)

[Over 9000 Views Yay]

The only problem with this movie is that it's on loop. I'd recommend Swivel so this will be on a video player. Otherwise, this is ok. Not the best, but it seems legit.

Agent64 responds:

Thanks! I would use Swivel, but I prefer uploading things to NewGrounds as swfs. Not sure why, though.

[Things I hate as an Artis]

Well we all have our ups and downs. The good thing is that no matter how bad some things seem, it can eventually work out for the better.

Cybernatium responds:

ha sure!

[TheEpicAdventure of Nico]

The only nitpick I have is that some of the voice acting could've been louder. Otherwise, this is pretty good and pretty funny. Keep it up! :)

Theuzielceron responds:

Thanks, will try to keep improving

[Game Project Ambiant test]

This is pretty great for a test. If this is how it's gonna be, then I can't wait for your game to come out. :)

anthony-p responds:

thanks ! :)

[A True Story]

Wtf? lmfao XD

TMJBtv responds:

I....I really wish I knew....

[Mk Vs Db Z Outworld Missi]

Where do I start:

1. The animation is too choppy. It really needs work.

2. Alot of the backgrounds were small to the point of seeing white on the sides. Learn to stretch out the backgrounds.

3. Make sure the dialogue is in the camera shots at all times. Sometimes the words are cut off, so you don't know what they're saying.

4. I'd recommend Swivel so your animation is not on loop.

Hope you read this and take my advice.

danielsdominick91 responds:

I'm not done the next part yet,but I'm working on it

[Toilet Paper]

You can't have the title and description in english, and the video in another language. Either keep it in 1 language, or use both at the same time.

By the way at 00:06, you got some tears that shouldn't be there.

PolloChidoman responds:

Thanks for the feedback!