I know this is just a school project, but at around 00:25 the guns disappear for half a second. Just be careful with small problems like that next time.
I know this is just a school project, but at around 00:25 the guns disappear for half a second. Just be careful with small problems like that next time.
Ah, I didn't catch that originally! Thank you!
I would talk about the problems with this movie, but you seem to know the problems yourself judging by your Author comment. But I will say it's never a good idea to ask people to 5 star your movie, especially with problems in it. It'll make people give you a low rating if not a blam rating. Just be careful with what you say next time and also try to improve. Good luck!
Honestly, thanks. I'm pretty new to newgrounds so anything helps.
It's no wonder you got front page. This was amazing work. Really hope you make more. Keep it up! :)
Thanks man! :'DD
Where do I start. You really need to stretch out backgrounds because you can see white in half of them. The art work really needs more effort put into it, not to mention the animation. Although the artwork for the Halo suits and guns are pretty legit, but that is not enough to give this a good rating. But seeing how you at least tried to make a legit movie, I'll give you 2/5. Just try harder next time. Good luck!
I just noticed that the white background is not supposed to happen. I'm trying to fix it now. I'm changing the file to an mp4.
Dude if this is your first animation, then my god was it amazing! Everything was spot on! Keep it up! :)
Thank you very much! Don't worry, I will! :D
Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!
Age 29, Male
Animator
United States
Joined on 6/13/14