That was pretty hilarious. Love it! xD
That was pretty hilarious. Love it! xD
Thank yeh!
My only nitpick is that it could've been slowed down some. Besides that, the animation and artwork was pretty great! Love the line work in this. Keep it up! :)
Thanks for the advice, I have changed the main file to a video at half speed. Thank you also for the complement it means a lot to me. Thank You.
The animation and artwork is pretty decent and everything. However, the voice acting really needs work here. I recommend Audacity so that you can take out the background noise and amplify the lines to make it sound better. It's free so it should be no problem to get.
Yeah I do use audacity but I didn't know how to use it that well
The animation and artwork is decent, but the audio could really use some work. I recommend Audacity so you can make the voice acting sound better. It's free so it should be no problem to get.
thank
im working on it because it isnĀ“t the complete anomation
This was pretty good for your 1st attempt. Although I believe there should be more animation put into the character's movement. But I can see that effort was put into this and that is what I like to view! Keep up the practice!
Thanks for your feedback. I have until this animation been focusing primarily on the movement of the mouth but in this animation, I tried to put alot more facial expressions such as jaw movements, eye brows etc but you are right I need to invest more into eye expressions and body movement as well. Appreciate the feedback....back to more practice.
Looks pretty good! Like it!
Thanks man!
Everything looks pretty great in general despite it being unfinished. Love the art style and the voice acting. But there is something called the "Dumping Grounds". It's the button next to your message button where anyone can post tests, unfinished projects, etc at. And with it, you can show off anything to your friends, family, and random users on here. So please do that instead.
Cheers dude ^^
If this was just an exercise, then I bet your full-on projects must be amazing. This was really great animation and artwork going on here. Love the video! Keep it up! :)
Hey yeah , that's old
i did that in like one night
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/669593
is an example of full project or
that
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/669692
Well, that was interesting. I had no idea what was going on lol. But I will say to try and balance out the audio a bit. It's like some things were way more louder than others. And also maybe get some voice actors so you wont have to use text anymore. Just try a littler harder next time. Good luck!
Gracias por el consejo amigo :D
Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!
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