Seems pretty promising. Can't wait to see the finished project. lol
Seems pretty promising. Can't wait to see the finished project. lol
Thank you very much, I hope not to disappoint
So much NOPE! XD
But yeah, this was pretty great. One of the most scariest videos I've seen on Newgrounds so far. The story is interesting, the artwork can be very terrifying at times, and the suspension is spot on! Although the animation wasn't anything perfect, but yet it's what gives off a eerie vibe in this video. Keep up the good work!
Thank you very much! I was (for the sake of experimenting) trying something a bit different than traditional animation and went for a more an interactive slideshow.
I'll give you some credit that the animation is decent to an extent, but the major problem with this is the fact the video is not even finished. If you want to put unfinished projects on Newgrounds, there is a spot called Dumping Grounds where you can post tests, walk cycles, and unfinished projects like this one. Submitting under judgement is for 100% finished projects, so this will get a low score if not blamed. I'm aware this is your 1st animation, so please take my advice and try to improve. Good luck!
How can you go to the dumping grounds?
That was really wonderful for your 1st animation. Love the cute character designs, the artwork is simple but creative, and all the sound effects match perfectly with the slapstick. Although I usually wouldn't like tween in animation, but it was actually pretty good here. If this was your 1st animation, I can only imagine your future projects. Keep up the good work! :)
Thanks for the motivating words. Now that I got the basics out of the way, the next project would be something more complex.
Pretty well made. Love the animation, artwork, and the color scheme. Even the commentary between the duo wasn't so bad. Keep up the good work!
Thanks. Will do :)
I really do adore videos like this. The fact that there is little to no dialogue, all of the story is told through the video's quality. And let me just say I don't have any problem with this. The animation, character design, artwork, color scheme, and just about everything is spot-on! Not to mention I love this for that fact I'm a sucker for robots. 5/5 rating just for you! Keep up this 'mazing work! :)
Thank you for your comment :). I just started my work on newground, so i have problem with actors, but I decided to make some animations without dialogues, so I hope that you' ll like the next ones. I Also encourage to check guy which made the song. Without him the animation would never come out.
Check it :) https://soundcloud.com/user-353406772/li-trip
Well I mean it's not perfect, but your video is definitely not that terrible either. Your character design is pretty spot-on, and the animation isn't really shit. Although I will say your only big problem is that the video is too short. Next time try submitting a longer video, or atleast put the short ones in the Dumping Grounds. Either way, don't be so hard on yourself. Just keep on improving and you may come up with some good content. Good luck!
thank you:)
It's alright for your 1st animation. The pixel animation is good and everything, but something this small belongs on the Dumping Grounds rather than submitting it under judgement. Besides that, keep up the good work!
VERY true, I will now keep that in mind (then i'll look for the dumping grounds)
Thank you so much!
So we meet again eh lol. Well I can see you made a bit of improvement. Especially for the fact you got Swivel, which was something I forgot to mention on your last episode. Glad to see the text stays on for just a couple seconds longer. I can tell you took some of my advice. Although this is just a small nitpick, but I feel there could've been more animation between the characters talking instead of them just being still. But again, it's not a big problem. This episode is better than the last one, and I hope you keep on improving! Looking good so far. :)
Well thank you. I am kinda happy. About Swivel, I've been using it since I've started to animate, except that for some reason the quality on the previous video... I dunno what happened to it. Also, I will try to add some movements for the characters when they talk. I wrote about that in the script but when it came, it looked bad so I quit. Anyway, you are really helpful for me, seriously, so thank you!
Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!
Age 29, Male
Animator
United States
Joined on 6/13/14