ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ghosteses]

Pretty adorable lol. The animation is pretty great, the character designs are pretty cute, and the music is catchy. Though I recommend Swivel so the animation is not on loop. It's free so it should be no problem to get.

Rovertarthead responds:

Um Thats exactly what I actually used for this.. Oh wait no my bad that was for something else but yes I have Swivel already It's a very helpful program. Thank you so much for your review too it was very helpful.

[Mommy?]

Damn, that was pretty suspenseful. Really love the animation, the color scheme, and the voice acting. A perfect little Halloween video. Keep up the good work!

Animachado responds:

Thank you very much :D

[When life hits you]

I can relate so much. Especially with what happen today. -_-+

QuillDn responds:

lol sigh.. i wonder what happened..

[Akumi the Bounty Hunter]

I'm not even sure where to begin. Everything about this was spot on! The animation, character designs, line-work, color scheme, the audio, etc. was all x marks the spot. The fact you worked on Hi Hi Puffy Ami Yumi really shows it! Use to watch that show as a kid lol. But yeah, this is my next favorite. And I'm sure those 10 years of waiting really paid off! I can't wait to see this project take off! You get all of my support Milton. :)

MiltoniusArts responds:

Thank you! Much appreciated! Audio credit goes to my friends Dave, Ben and Kevin. Oh yes, I bring bits of every project I work on into my own projects. I can't believe how much time has gone by since I worked in the animation industry... I still feel young though! Thank you so much for your support!

[Sword/Shield Practice]

Short, but pretty great! The animation alone gets this a 4/5. Keep up the good work! :)

Vibra859 responds:

Thank you!

[Root's Responsibility - Root & Digby 24]

Your series just gets better and better. Love the effort put into this! :)

jerbjpg responds:

Thanks for continuing to watch ShaeGuy!

[Skirts and Pants: Walking beggar]

That was pretty great. The animation and the line-work is pretty good, and the humor is funny. Made me laugh at the end lol. Keep up the good work!

braindog75 responds:

Thanks man !

[Tedventure]

I'll give you 2/5 for the effort that was put into this at least, but this has problems:

1. If you really want to work with stop-motion I highly recommend you use objects such as clay, legos, or anything that can move its arms and legs around. Using random objects that cannot move anything around isn't really a good idea. It's all about giving the illusion of your characters being alive.
2. Try to get a microphone for voice acting instead of just using written paper for dialogue. Or at least try to get voice actors that can help you. There are plenty on Newgrounds that can give a helping hand.
3. I recommend swivel so your stop-motion video is not on loop. It's free so it should be no problem to get.
4. When it comes to stop-motion, it is very important to keep everybody out of the frames period. So if there is even so much as a human thumb in the frames, it will ruin the experience of the video. Unless if it's part of the story or something, there is no excuse for it.
5. Sort of a nit-pick, but the frames in the video are going too fast. Either add more frames to make the stop-motion smoother, or slow it down some.

Now don't think I'm hating on you. I'm only giving out constructive criticism because I know you have potential to make something great. Please take my advice and try to improve. And I know you can improve seeing the energy that was put into making this. Good luck!

hreyas responds:

Points taken but the fact is it all all came all of a sudden , which is why i could make it in lesser time , a clay animation would have took more time. Collab would have taken more time.Swivel isnt compatible on either of my computers.It was made in Ipad ,so still figuring out how to make it better the next time , and moreover the place i live in , I have seriously nobody from the same domain who can understand the values from the direction point of view, my mother helped me , I mean.Making it without any possible serious help , i must say it was very very frustating to see those occuring bodies in the frame, I am not whining but the truth is it was a pain in the ass to make this