ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Feeling DBZ (Pilot) 2]

It's pretty standard at most. Nothing really says "Oh my god! You have to watch this!", but it's not too bad. The color scheme is legit, but the animation could be just a little bit better, and the same thing can be said about the audio. But hopefully it'll look better after you get done with the editing and the work you're putting into it. Good luck!

XxFalopioxX responds:

thanks and yes, i still editing and re-editing and adding more animation, sounds , better timing and more fluid. its kinda of my first work in a Cintiq HD 13" Touch and wants some feedback, still dont know how long it will take me to finish thiis proyect. again thanks for the feed back.

[Robots & Barbearians]

Love it man! The artwork was amazing, the color schemes are beautiful to look at, and I love the cool effects for space! While I'm not really a fan of this type of animation, it really wasn't so bad here. And whenever it said "Chapter 1", does that mean this will get a sequel? Because I would love to see that! Keep it up!

RickMarin responds:

Thank you , I made 3 more that I need to edit and I will post soon .

[Talk sansy to me]

It's not much to look at, but I love Undertale so this gets a 3/5 from me.

LilRookieToon responds:

thank you for an honest response :3

[Divided Nations Episode1]

Well I know you say this is an older animation and all, but it's not much of an excuse. I will say I am on the line with this. It's nothing great but it's nothing terrible either.

MuricanSatire responds:

Yeah, but this is back when I literally had no clue what I was doing. Thanks for the feed back anyway though. I'll upload the newer ones soon enough, All of them are on YouTube if you care to watch,links on the channel page, You don't have to though.

[Five Nights At Yoshi's 3 Ending (FANMADE)]

Well, I can see why your videos keep getting blamed. And since you are asking for criticism, here we go:
1. This is something small, but I'd recommend Swivel so that you can control the volume on your video, and even go in full screen if you want.
2. Speaking of volume, the audio is REALLY bad here. The voice acting could be alot better, and every bit of it could've been turned down some.
3. Same thing can be said for the music.
4. I'm not expecting much, but some kind of background would be nice instead of just pure black.
5. The animation really needs work here as well.

So there you go. Some criticism that I hope will help you improve in the new year of 2016. Another thing is you shouldn't tell people on what rating to give you. Alot of people would give you a 0-1 just because of that. So be careful on what you say. And as for this video in general, well lets just say history will repeat itself. Hope you do good in the future. Good luck!

MuppetProtesterClock responds:

I wish I knew how to improve the audio, but I'm not quite sure how...

But I think I can fix the rest.

I've heard of Swivel, and maybe I CAN use that.

I only have about a year and a half of Flash experience anyway...

I fixed the audio problem by using MP3's instead of WAV's.

[Trashman]

Well the animation isn't that amazing, but obviously that is not the focus here. The art and the shading is REALLY great man! Although their should really be some kind of audio to make it even more interesting. For what it is, I'm glad I saw this. Keep it up!

PencilPals responds:

Thanks man! Yeah next time we'll also include audio and stuff like that, this was only a little 5 day project :P

[Animation tests]

Usually I'd say animation tests shouldn't be submitted under judgement, and that there is a forum I think on here where you can post it. But these tests are REALLY well made. The animations are really great to look at. If you can make this kind of stuff now, I can't wait to see what else you can make.

ganuganu responds:

Thank you. Ya i do understand these are tests but i thought it would be good to see in portal.

[the room]

I really didn't know what to think. The animation is okay I guess, and so is the art behind it. But their should really be some kind of audio in order to get interested in this. I would've given it a 3/5 if that were the case. For what it is, it's not that bad but it's not that great either. Just try a bit more next time.

cabenda responds:

I totaly agree. now when i look at it, i can see that it needs audio.

thanks

[Game Reel 2015]

To be fair, the video itself is pretty legit especially the music that goes with it. But as far as "game videos" go, this should be on YouTube rather than here. Just saying.

JackAstral responds:

People usually upload animation and voice reels here, so I thought it kinda made sense. It's not a real submission really, just a quick little thing

[Paper Cube]

This is pretty legit for one of your first animations. Didn't really know what was going to happen lol. Keep on improving man! I think you will do good.

ElectroBit responds:

I will, thanks. I'm also making a 30 minute 3D animation for a school project.