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I can tell you use MS Paint to do your animations with. I should know because I used MS Paint and Windows Movie Maker when I was your age lol. I will say it's a great tool to get yourself more comfortable with animations in general, but I recommend you switch to Flash 8 one day. It can really smooth out your outlines and make them less rough. You're obviously new, so I'll give you some slack. Just keep on practicing and animating, and you'll be making great toons one day. Keep up the good work! :)

Sebmaniac responds:

It was actually Flipaclip and this was in 2020, My animation sucked xD i animate on FireAlpaca and edit with Shotcut. My animations are way WAY better now, i'm still working on them and bad thing is i'm working on 5 projects at the same time xD

I think my favorite part is how the animation is so smooth that the characters were always moving even when they're just standing. I don't see that often on Newgrounds. But yeah, the submission was a blast! Loved the character designs on the guys, the voice acting was hilarious, and the art was really spot on. Keep up the amazing work! :)

hillrdavid responds:

Thank you for the kind comment :)

Really did love everything about this! First of all, I admired the rough outlines. It makes for a great dramatic feel to this. Also love the use of claymation in this! It gives a weird alien feel in contrast to the 2D animation. And lastly, the character designs felt original and fresh. I don't always come across dramatic and tense submissions like this, but when I do it's a treat! I don't know if you'll continue this story, but I hope you do. Keep up the amazing work! :)

MarbleBlastZone responds:

Hey thank you so much for the rating!! I dont think I plan on continuing this, but who knows!!

The linework was obviously the best part of this submission. It's just very anime and detailed lol. But I would've put in sound effects or something just to make this more engaging. Either way, keep up the good work!

SkyHawkins responds:

Thank you for the feedback! I’ll definitely keep sound effects in mind for next time

A lot of these different stop-motion clips were very creative lol. My favorite was with the glass cups and the red liquid. You got some great talent, and I'd love to see more of it! :)

duffosaur responds:

thanks props will do another one at some point

Was all of that 3D?! I legit thought the background was live-action and only the doughnut was CGI. Damn you got some great attention to detail lol! But yeah, that tourettes guy sound byte was hilarious to add. Keep up the good work! :)

Anisomniac responds:

Yes, it's all 3D CGI. I learned how to do it within a couple days from Blender Guru's tutorial series:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NyJWoyVx_XI&list=PLjEaoINr3zgEq0u2MzVgAaHEBt--xLB6U&index=1

He's really good with Blender tutorials! Also I'm glad that you like this, I usually don't have much time to make stuff like this, but now that it's summer I think I can do more. I mainly do 2D animation and art. I was kinda edgy when I first started out, though. (-_-')

I do like the animation and linework here. It seems smooth and detailed, but it also feels unfinished. If this is unfinished, I wouldn't recommend posting it under judgement. Wait until everything is polished and good. Also audio of any kind would really help this out. You got some talent here, it just needs to be improved on. Good luck!

ZykicoBeast responds:

It's finished!! Thanks for the feedback.

The animation is actually decent here, but I'd recommend you get a better animation program like Flash 8. It'd help smooth the outlines so it doesn't look so rushed. Speaking of which, you should have mouth movements here. It doesn't have to be perfectly lip synced, the mouths just need to move up and down. And lastly you should make legit backgrounds. It doesn't have to be amazing either, but it'd be better than having single colored backgrounds. You got some talent here, it just needs to be improved on. Good luck!

littleMAHER1 responds:

I will say that I animated this on a phone which explains why it looks rushed
I am looking for a proper animation program now that I got a computer
the background was a choice because in the orignal video there is not really a background but I will keep that in mind
The mouth movement I am on the fence on tho but I will think about it
thanks for you're constructive criticism I will keep all of this in mind!

I can tell you're new so I'll give you some credit. You seem to have some skill, but I'd recommend a better animation program to use. There were so many animation errors in this that I don't even really need to explain as it's pretty obvious when you watch this. The best I can say for now is keep on practicing and improving. You got some potential that is waiting to burst out and amaze everyone here. Good luck!

StickSchoolStudios responds:

thanks, I use FlipaClip so sometimes it glitches. Most recent episodes should be better

Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!

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