ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[No Cat]

This almost feels like an idea for a chicken noodle soup commercial at a superbowl lol. Pretty funny man.

Unabated responds:

I am glad you really appreciated it. Thank you.

[Sonic Forgot to Make Up His Bed. He lives to regret it.]

There is quite a bit that needs to be improved on. The biggest problem I think is there are so many scenes that go on for a long time in utter silence. This video could've been like 30 seconds to a minute shorter if most scenes didn't drag out for too long. And speaking of silence, I would strongly recommend music if there is gonna be pauses. The silence just makes it awkward. Another thing is how you made the video. I don't know what program you used, but if it's a flash file, I recommend Swivel so you don't have to use a screen recording program. It's free so it should be no problem to get. And finally the sprite animation in general really needs improvement here. Not a whole lot of movement going on here. In conclusion, while you have the basic idea on how to make content, there is plenty to learn and I hope to see you improve. Good luck!

SonicWackyspeed responds:

June edit
Just to add, it lags on mobile. Still trying to fix that.
Thanks for the feedback. I do understand where you are coming from seeing as I made this in 2 days, using scratch. After all, this is my fist sprite animation over 10 seconds so I'm pretty new to this.
October edit
Here's a new file.

[Mental Murder Mystery]

Got some really fast, energetic animation going on here. Love it! :)

GerritTime responds:

thanks man :)

[Johnny Rocket]

I feel like this could be a full on video game. I'd buy that! xD

Pegotoons responds:

I made this game few years ago
https://store.steampowered.com/app/942300/_Johnny_Rocket/

[One year later.]

Compared to your first animation, you have obviously improved. Though I strongly recommend putting in audio. It can help your animations be more engaging. Aside from that, happy 1 year man! :)

Bountyspecialtist responds:

Yea I agree, I have been gettin a mic and some software to record my voice. So the next animation of mine probably will have my voice in it.

[You're Pointless]

How to mess up your life in 6 seconds.

GrandAngelicSwords responds:

The Eldritch Circle shall accept no more, no less

[Aphelion Ghost Fleet Valley volume 2 promo 2]

The biggest problem here is that the voice acting needs a lot more work. It was too quiet and the music pretty much washed it down. I recommend Audacity so that you can amplify the lines more. It's free so it should be no problem to get. Aside from that, you got some pretty good animation going on here, and for FlipaClip it's really impressive. Hope to see more in the future. :)

BaconBob9000 responds:

Thanks for the critique sadly this was my last ditch effort to release something which could promote my kickstarter campaign which is basically dead in the water by now.

[Just Let Me Sleep A Little Longer]

Walking Dead in a nutshell.

BrandonPewPew responds:

Just need to replace it with a hospital bed

[Mortal Kombat AMV]

Some pretty good pixel animation. Simple but pretty effective! Keep up the good work! :)

ZVCH responds:

Thanks I appreciate your support!