ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Day at the Theme Park]

The one thing I noticed is at the first scene when the characters are walking, the booths behind them were moving the wrong way. Instead of the booths moving alongside them, they should be moving away from the characters. Be careful with that. With that said, this was decently well animated and I feel like you're not giving yourself enough credit. Keep up the good work!

B-bumbs responds:

Thanks for the feedback, as for the error yeah thanks for pointing it out, I have no idea how I did not see that error especially it being more obvious than ever, luckily it is a decently easy error to fix and I am going to fix it before I upload it into other platforms, can't here since I already posted it so there really isn't any turning back. Other than that glad you liked it in some ways. Thanks for watching.

[Wanna Suck?]

Love the deleted scene for who framed roger rabbit lmao. But yeah, nice tracking animation and a funny idea. Keep up the great work! :)

CharlieEmerson responds:

Lmao! Thank you, appreciate it!

[Agent]

The stop-motion itself was really good I'll admit, but did you mean to leave the TV on? If not, make sure to turn it off next time. Also I think some sound effects could really help make this more engaging. With that said, keep up the good claymation.

Nalgotico responds:

Yeah, I forgot to turn it off, I have some others that don't have the tv on, I'll upload them soon

[Tired]

You have a link to this cover? It seemed pretty funny. lol

Willgame21 responds:

I just put give up song on tiktok

["Itty Bitty Bunny Milkies" But She's A Kung-Fu Killing Machine]

Really nice action scene. :)

GrandAngelicSwords responds:

Thank you, I appreciate your feedback!

[ClayMan]

Pretty neat though I would've put in music, sound effects, or any king of audio to really make it stand out. Either way, love it. lol

Maxfilm responds:

music added :)

[THE NEW LAMBORGHINI URUS | EEVEE render]

Pretty legit.

treza007 responds:

Thank you my friend, this really does motivate me to provide more !!!

[Dungeons And Kobolds]

First of all, I wanna say that this is some of the smoothest animation I've seen on this website in a long time. Every piece of movement was fluent and all the body proportions were in place. I can only imagine how long this actually took to make. However, the biggest problem here is the lack of audio in most areas, especially the intro. You could put royalty free music in your intro if you can. Also the lack of voice acting can be pretty distracting in my opinion. Whether or not it was intentional, I just don't think it works out well with amazing quality animation like this. You can either have voice acting or go silent with body language as a means to communicate. If you do want voice acting, there are forums on this site that lets you communicate with potential voice actors. With all this said, this was a pretty great submission. It just needs to be polished more in the audio department. Hope to see more from you in the future. :)

Tevart responds:

Hello, thanks for watching the video and for the comment.
This is the first video I made, but I'm working hard to improve.
You're right, the sound is very bad and I can't find music that fits. Regarding the voices, the NewGrouns community is very good, I hope to find help.
Sorry for my English.