I can always tell when certain young animators have great potential within them, and you are no exception. You got all the basics down, some of the shots are actually pretty smooth, and the whole idea feels original to me. I think my biggest nitpick with this is that some of the voice acting is pretty quiet. If you don't have what's called Audacity, I really do recommend it. It is a free audio program that can help amplify the voice acting to be loud and clear. If you have this much skill now, I can't wait to see what you can make years to come. I wish you the best of luck! :)