ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[the cat be schmoovin]

Did you make the music or did it come from somewhere? Because it sounded pretty dope! Also really good animation and character designs btw. :)

PurpleLad responds:

thanks I'm glad u liked it :))
link to the song btw :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WPVHwwm-oDc&ab_channel=matee88

[THE NEW LAMBORGHINI URUS | EEVEE render]

Pretty legit.

treza007 responds:

Thank you my friend, this really does motivate me to provide more !!!

[Dungeons And Kobolds]

First of all, I wanna say that this is some of the smoothest animation I've seen on this website in a long time. Every piece of movement was fluent and all the body proportions were in place. I can only imagine how long this actually took to make. However, the biggest problem here is the lack of audio in most areas, especially the intro. You could put royalty free music in your intro if you can. Also the lack of voice acting can be pretty distracting in my opinion. Whether or not it was intentional, I just don't think it works out well with amazing quality animation like this. You can either have voice acting or go silent with body language as a means to communicate. If you do want voice acting, there are forums on this site that lets you communicate with potential voice actors. With all this said, this was a pretty great submission. It just needs to be polished more in the audio department. Hope to see more from you in the future. :)

Tevart responds:

Hello, thanks for watching the video and for the comment.
This is the first video I made, but I'm working hard to improve.
You're right, the sound is very bad and I can't find music that fits. Regarding the voices, the NewGrouns community is very good, I hope to find help.
Sorry for my English.

[No Cat]

This almost feels like an idea for a chicken noodle soup commercial at a superbowl lol. Pretty funny man.

Unabated responds:

I am glad you really appreciated it. Thank you.

[Sonic Forgot to Make Up His Bed. He lives to regret it.]

There is quite a bit that needs to be improved on. The biggest problem I think is there are so many scenes that go on for a long time in utter silence. This video could've been like 30 seconds to a minute shorter if most scenes didn't drag out for too long. And speaking of silence, I would strongly recommend music if there is gonna be pauses. The silence just makes it awkward. Another thing is how you made the video. I don't know what program you used, but if it's a flash file, I recommend Swivel so you don't have to use a screen recording program. It's free so it should be no problem to get. And finally the sprite animation in general really needs improvement here. Not a whole lot of movement going on here. In conclusion, while you have the basic idea on how to make content, there is plenty to learn and I hope to see you improve. Good luck!

SonicWackyspeed responds:

June edit
Just to add, it lags on mobile. Still trying to fix that.
Thanks for the feedback. I do understand where you are coming from seeing as I made this in 2 days, using scratch. After all, this is my fist sprite animation over 10 seconds so I'm pretty new to this.
October edit
Here's a new file.

[Mental Murder Mystery]

Got some really fast, energetic animation going on here. Love it! :)

GerritTime responds:

thanks man :)

[Johnny Rocket]

I feel like this could be a full on video game. I'd buy that! xD

Pegotoons responds:

I made this game few years ago
https://store.steampowered.com/app/942300/_Johnny_Rocket/

[One year later.]

Compared to your first animation, you have obviously improved. Though I strongly recommend putting in audio. It can help your animations be more engaging. Aside from that, happy 1 year man! :)

Bountyspecialtist responds:

Yea I agree, I have been gettin a mic and some software to record my voice. So the next animation of mine probably will have my voice in it.

[You're Pointless]

How to mess up your life in 6 seconds.

GrandAngelicSwords responds:

The Eldritch Circle shall accept no more, no less

[Aphelion Ghost Fleet Valley volume 2 promo 2]

The biggest problem here is that the voice acting needs a lot more work. It was too quiet and the music pretty much washed it down. I recommend Audacity so that you can amplify the lines more. It's free so it should be no problem to get. Aside from that, you got some pretty good animation going on here, and for FlipaClip it's really impressive. Hope to see more in the future. :)

BaconBob9000 responds:

Thanks for the critique sadly this was my last ditch effort to release something which could promote my kickstarter campaign which is basically dead in the water by now.