ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Odd Berry Squad!]

I will admit I appreciate the fact you're open to criticism as most folks are not. So with that said, obviously this has problems:

1. Nothing really felt authentic with the art in general. Almost everything seemed like it was nothing more than copying and pasting. Even the character designs look like that due to there being some white line around their limbs. I can't say if you been copying everything or not. If so, learn to draw out your characters, props, etc. And if you are not, then be careful on how you draw.
2. Speaking of drawing, please make at least a few more backgrounds instead of just using the same one in different shots. Especially at the end with everybody outside. It makes you look lazy.
3. There are some parts that went on for too long, especially with that awkward black joke. 13 seconds of dead air is not funny.
4. I recommend you learn how to do animation fps instead of tweening everything. Although I have seen tween animation done good before, this is not how to do it. So please try a different animation style.

Now I do give you a 2/5 rating because there is some good in this. The voice acting is good-ish for the most part, although I think it could be improved with the help of Audacity. And the lip-sync is actually pretty spot on! But that's really about it. Everything else holds you back. Now I understand you are a beginner animator, so please take my advice and try to improve. You do have potential, so I really hope you make good quality in the near future. Good luck!

kcdawg13 responds:

Thank you very much for your criticism. I currently use Anime Studio, which isn't very good for animating, especially for artists that like drawing their characters and props, etc. I drew everything in Photoshop aside from the Shotgun, I'm attempting re-draw all the characters and such and make them look more crisp. I hope to branch out into Flash or ToonBoom in the very close future. Sadly right now I am currently stuck with this, mainly because my computer sucks and can't handle anything.

Again, thank you very much. I really do appreciate it.

[Sticker-Mation]

I really didn't know what to expect, but this really blew me away! I've never seen anything like that, and I really do mean that! It's beyond amazing and original! My next favorite. :)

theo1231231 responds:

Yes! thank you my friend, really glad you liked my project, this is kinda what I was going for so Im glad you got it, glad I got through to you, makes it all worth while :)

[Animated Teaser 07: im late]

For a short video this was pretty great! Love the detail on everything. Not bad!

ibrabdo responds:

thx :)

[UNDERTALES]

That was pretty good for your 1st undertale video. Just keep on improving. Good luck!

Wondermeow responds:

Thanks cheers

[Lake Nyos disaster]

Pretty interesting. I was looking this up whenever you were talking about it. Sorry for the people who lost their lives.

SteamCyborg responds:

Thanks, this homework was supposed to be an essay but that's boring ;)

[If Mr Crocker was in Pokemon]

Everything about this was perfect. The animation style was just spot on, the jokes were hilarious, and the Crocker voice was just perfect! Love every bit of this. :)

storytellerYT responds:

So happy to hear :) thank you

[Halloween Special]

Those costumes were adorable on the hamsters. You have just earned yourself a follower. :)

PopNebulaDreamer responds:

Yay! I have a fan! : D

By the way I'm actually working on another Halloween episode.

[Pop Nebula Dreamer Level 5]

So all of this was animated? In that case, this is one of the best looking sprite animations I have seen in a long time. I adore everything about this! Love the animation, sprite work, the color scheme, the character designs, voices, music, etc. One of my next favorites. Keep up the amazing work! :)

PopNebulaDreamer responds:

Oh my gosh! Thank you!! I'm so happy to hear that! ^ ^

And yes, everything's animated frame by frame. Actually a funny story about the close up animations in episode 5 is because one of the voice actor's mentioned that the show looked too much like a video game. Then I was all like "I shall fix this!"