ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Root's Responsibility - Root & Digby 24]

Your series just gets better and better. Love the effort put into this! :)

jerbjpg responds:

Thanks for continuing to watch ShaeGuy!

[Skirts and Pants: Walking beggar]

That was pretty great. The animation and the line-work is pretty good, and the humor is funny. Made me laugh at the end lol. Keep up the good work!

braindog75 responds:

Thanks man !

[Tedventure]

I'll give you 2/5 for the effort that was put into this at least, but this has problems:

1. If you really want to work with stop-motion I highly recommend you use objects such as clay, legos, or anything that can move its arms and legs around. Using random objects that cannot move anything around isn't really a good idea. It's all about giving the illusion of your characters being alive.
2. Try to get a microphone for voice acting instead of just using written paper for dialogue. Or at least try to get voice actors that can help you. There are plenty on Newgrounds that can give a helping hand.
3. I recommend swivel so your stop-motion video is not on loop. It's free so it should be no problem to get.
4. When it comes to stop-motion, it is very important to keep everybody out of the frames period. So if there is even so much as a human thumb in the frames, it will ruin the experience of the video. Unless if it's part of the story or something, there is no excuse for it.
5. Sort of a nit-pick, but the frames in the video are going too fast. Either add more frames to make the stop-motion smoother, or slow it down some.

Now don't think I'm hating on you. I'm only giving out constructive criticism because I know you have potential to make something great. Please take my advice and try to improve. And I know you can improve seeing the energy that was put into making this. Good luck!

hreyas responds:

Points taken but the fact is it all all came all of a sudden , which is why i could make it in lesser time , a clay animation would have took more time. Collab would have taken more time.Swivel isnt compatible on either of my computers.It was made in Ipad ,so still figuring out how to make it better the next time , and moreover the place i live in , I have seriously nobody from the same domain who can understand the values from the direction point of view, my mother helped me , I mean.Making it without any possible serious help , i must say it was very very frustating to see those occuring bodies in the frame, I am not whining but the truth is it was a pain in the ass to make this

[Tiggertie Comics Animated: 1]

It was pretty legit for something basic. Although I do recommend swivel so the animation is not on loop. It's free so it should be no problem to get. And I recommend you make videos longer than this, or at least put really short videos in the dumping grounds. The dumping grounds is the button next to your message button.

InvasionOfTheDawgs responds:

I HAVE swivel. I just wanted it to be a vector animation.

[Walabie The Rabbit & The Bronson Boys Part 2]

That was pretty funny lol. Especially love the part with the old guy and the kid. I can see why "dark" was one of your tags xD. But anyway, the animation was legit for the style you're going for, the art was pretty impressive, and again this was really funny! Keep up the great work! :)

oldmanorange responds:

Thanks a bunch for really digging the whole thing. The old guy and his poor son always make me laugh. Ha ha. Yah I feel this animation style is really the only way to pump out sorta longer episodes, which really still take quite a bit of time... But oh well, It's still making progress. Thanks again.

[The Button on the Desk!]

It was pretty good for a college project. Very cute indeed. I hope everybody involve continues to keep working hard and make something amazing in the near future! :)

Intrapath responds:

Thanks! We've already had 1 member of the team graduate last year, and most of the remaining members will be graduating this school year, so I'm sure they will!

[Why Subscribe? Lumpy Biscuits Promo (New Welcome Trailer)]

Got a good looking tablet there! lol

But yeah, looking forward to your tips and such. I know plenty of animators that are just starting out, and you can show them a few things. :)

LumpyBiscuits responds:

thanks m9