Some of the nitpicks I have with this submission is that the voice acting could've been a little bit better. It got pretty emotionless at times. Not to mention it got really quiet in certain parts. The music shouldn't be louder than the voice acting. Also I think some more facial expressions wouldn't hurt to have. But aside from that, this was really good. The artwork is pretty good in my opinion. The animation can be a little bit trippy, but that's what makes it interesting. The music is really amazing and everything. And the effects were honestly mind blowing. The part where they go into some matrix-like world was really great! This was great for what it is, and I hope you continue to make more. Good luck!