ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mafia women speedpaint]

Looks pretty good. Keep up the good work!

RobertNeag responds:

thank you ;)

[Brian Reagan: Mosen]

I mean, it's really not that terrible. Believe me, I know plenty of submissions that tried far less and succeed less. The lip syncing is actually pretty good to be honest. But yeah, not really a fan of tween animation. It can be good if done right, but here though, it really needs some work. The art and linework also needs some work in my opinion. The overall submission is nothing bad, it just needs more work.

But now my biggest problem here is not the submission, it's the fact you tried using your age as an excuse to avoid criticism. I'm sorry kid, but being 11 does not mean a damn thing. You could be like 8 on here, and still be criticized. The idea of constructive criticism is to help those in need of improvement, and watching them improve in the near future. So yeah, there is really no excuse to avoid being criticized in general, and your age especially is no excuse either. Plus, I know a good chunk of 11 year olds that has made wonderful animations, and put their all into it. All I'm saying is, never use your age as an excuse. It really is not ok.

And don't think I'm hating on you. From the look of the submission, it seems you have some potential and talent that could really shine one day. You just need to put your all into it, and try to make something wonderful. So yeah, I wish you the best of luck!

UdoImehProductions responds:

Thankyou. This is the best way to criticize in a constructive way. I'll take the tips

[Pizzaman]

Buddy, words cannot describe how amazing this submission really is. And the fact that this is your 1st submission on newgrounds and 2nd time directing is what's really blowing my mind right now. You and glasscake both did a wonderful job with this. Where do I start? The animation is smooth and fast whenever it needs to be, the art and linework is really wonderful in my opinion, and the overall story is just hilarious! Not to mention the color scheme is really pretty to look at. If this is what you got under your belt so far, I can't even imagine what your future projects will be like! I really hope you get a daily feature because of this! This is my next favorite! And you got yourself another fan! I can wait to see more from you! :D

Shaipi responds:

Aah thank you so much for your kind words ! I don't usually get such great comment, it's very encouraging ! I'll keep doing my best, thanks !

[The Story of Moldylocks]

A really amazing, and hilarious submission! The animation basically knows when to either slow down, or be fast paced for the comedic timing. The art and linework is especially good in my opinion! It all basically fits into the comedy category. Not to mention the writing is pretty good too. Bottom line is that this is another good quality animation to check out and have a laugh at. Keep up the good work!

[Shadow's smoking problem (sonic oddshow collab entry)]

Pretty good pixel animation as most submissions like this one would normally have! Also yeah, that was pretty hilarious lmao. The only thing I can nitpick is that the animation is on loop. I recommend Swivel so the animation will be on a video player. It's free, so it should be no problem to get. But yeah, pretty good. Keep up the good work!

fahyda responds:

don't worry ive already done a conversion to mp4, but that ones going on meh youtube thanks tho

[Sok and the Bird]

Pretty impressive for your 1st animation! The animation itself is pretty good as far as comedic timing goes. While the art and line work is not amazing (Granted it is your 1st animation, so I'll give you that), it also makes everything look cute and adorable. I also love that Mario bit right at the end! Gave me a bit of nostalgia. Bottom line is that you got potential and talent to make great content! If it's this decent now, just imagine what you could make in the future. All I can say is good luck and try hard! Have fun on newgrounds! :)

Snackers responds:

Thank you! I'm working an another one currently, and so far it's looking to be much better. You're support is really appreciated man, thanks.