Granted the art and line-work was pretty good in my opinion, however it isn't a good idea to submit tests under judgement. Tests, walk cycles, etc usually gets a really low score if not blamed. If you want to put tests on here, there is something called the "Dumping Grounds". It's the button next to your message button where anyone can post tests at. And with it, you can show off anything to your friends, family, and random users on here. So please do that instead. A little nitpick but some audio in your intro would be nice to have. Although I imagine you would do this anyway, so it goes without being said. lol