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Buddy, words cannot describe how amazing this submission really is. And the fact that this is your 1st submission on newgrounds and 2nd time directing is what's really blowing my mind right now. You and glasscake both did a wonderful job with this. Where do I start? The animation is smooth and fast whenever it needs to be, the art and linework is really wonderful in my opinion, and the overall story is just hilarious! Not to mention the color scheme is really pretty to look at. If this is what you got under your belt so far, I can't even imagine what your future projects will be like! I really hope you get a daily feature because of this! This is my next favorite! And you got yourself another fan! I can wait to see more from you! :D

Shaipi responds:

Aah thank you so much for your kind words ! I don't usually get such great comment, it's very encouraging ! I'll keep doing my best, thanks !

A really amazing, and hilarious submission! The animation basically knows when to either slow down, or be fast paced for the comedic timing. The art and linework is especially good in my opinion! It all basically fits into the comedy category. Not to mention the writing is pretty good too. Bottom line is that this is another good quality animation to check out and have a laugh at. Keep up the good work!

Pretty good pixel animation as most submissions like this one would normally have! Also yeah, that was pretty hilarious lmao. The only thing I can nitpick is that the animation is on loop. I recommend Swivel so the animation will be on a video player. It's free, so it should be no problem to get. But yeah, pretty good. Keep up the good work!

fahyda responds:

don't worry ive already done a conversion to mp4, but that ones going on meh youtube thanks tho

Pretty impressive for your 1st animation! The animation itself is pretty good as far as comedic timing goes. While the art and line work is not amazing (Granted it is your 1st animation, so I'll give you that), it also makes everything look cute and adorable. I also love that Mario bit right at the end! Gave me a bit of nostalgia. Bottom line is that you got potential and talent to make great content! If it's this decent now, just imagine what you could make in the future. All I can say is good luck and try hard! Have fun on newgrounds! :)

Snackers responds:

Thank you! I'm working an another one currently, and so far it's looking to be much better. You're support is really appreciated man, thanks.

I don't even know what to say here lmao. It's so strange, out of this world, and yet so mystical. What kind of message were you trying to get across here? What was Neville's motivation here? What could it all mean?......I guess we will never know. XD

While this submission is not that bad or anything, it's really not that enjoyable either. The art and line work can really use a lot more improvement in my opinion. Maybe having outlines in the backgrounds for example. I mean, this wouldn't be a big issue if the animation was at least smooth and looking good. But even the animation is pretty stiff for the most part. Granted there is lip-syncing (which is not bad by the way), and some movements in the characters. But still, there should be a lot more movement than that. Especially in the song sequence, it was basically just a slideshow. Any submission under judgement should never be a slideshow. Not to mention the voice acting half the time was too quiet. Learn to amplify the voices so they are loud and clear. Don't take it the wrong way, I mean you do have some talent here that has potential. You just need to improve on the overall quality of your work because it is really lacking in certain parts. I hope you take my advice, and try to get better. Good luck!

BonfireCow responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'm still learning, and if you've seen the first episode, there's a massive improvement. I know this one has a lot of flaws, but granted I had a limited deadline, there wasn't much I could do. I'll take your advice about sounds and movements, thanks.

Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!

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