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This was actually pretty funny I'm not gonna lie lol. For starters, I do appreciate the pace of the submission. If you're going to do comedy, the pacing needs to be anything but slow. And the pacing here is pretty fast and smooth. Speaking on energy, I really do like the voice acting here. It is anything but dull and boring. So congratulations on the voice acting lol. However, the artwork isn't really anything that special, but that is just my opinion. Forgot to mention, but the animation is also pretty fast and fluid (which I really do love lol). Not to mention the dialogue was pretty funny on certain parts, especially the "poooorrr-nevermind" xD. Overall, the submission may have its quirks, but it's enjoyable nevertheless. Keep up the good work! :)

TylerBasham responds:

Thank you! :3

The overall quality is ok-ish at best. The idea for this series seems pretty funny, but the quality could be better. I think the biggest problem here is the voice acting. Clearly it is all done by the same guy, and the voice actor never sounded like he gave a damn. I strongly recommend getting other voice actors to help you, or at least try harder at voice acting. Speaking of audio, I also recommend music just so that your viewers can be a little bit more engaged, though this is more of a nitpick than anything else. The animation is nothing terrible, but it's not that enjoyable either. Some more movement in the characters wouldn't hurt. I know that art in animation can be pretty subjective in general. So in my opinion, the line-work can be a lot better than what it is. You have a really great idea for a series, but it's just that the quality is sort of holding it back. Don't think I'm hating on you and everything. I'm only giving out constructive criticism. And I hope you take my advice and try to improve in the future. Again, this submission is not awful or anything, but it's not that great either.

Memerfox responds:

I definitely do not see this as a hatefull comment, i actually find it really helpful. I think criticism makes you great. Anyways, my sense of humor is pretty 'dry' and that's what i (unintentionally) bring forward in the characters. movement is key yes, i agree, but i am not that advanced in working with my programs, like flash etc. But thank you for commenting, i'll try to bring these points to the next episode.

It's decent for what it is. I'd criticize the quality in terms of the art and everything, but that is obviously not the focus. The attention is on the podcast aspect and whatever these guys have to say. It's pretty interesting to say the least. It's nothing special, but it is worth watching. Not bad!

duffosaur responds:

thanks i'll work on imrpoving my drawings

This was pretty hilarious! It was so funny and yet very disturbing at the same time! The animation was amazing, the artwork is just as good in my opinion, and the voice actor was really great! Give that man an ice cream cake for a job well done! But yeah, can't get over how funny this is. You get 5/5! My next favorite! Keep up the good work! :)

kehny responds:

Thanks! I super apreciate it!

The overall quality is simple, but really effective! I adore everything here! Especially since there is no dialogue at all. Just the animation and the artwork telling a story, which I really do appreciate! Not bad mate! :)

TheFerridge responds:

Thank you for the kind words! :D

So we finally meet again after about a year, and I do have to say you got better quite a bit. While the pacing isn't exactly perfect, it is better than your patreon animation. Though I can tell you're changing your voice to sound like the girl here, at least you do a good job with it. And it's much better than subtitles. Your animation and artwork has improved quite a bit from what I can tell. However, the one big nitpick I have here is that sometimes the music is louder than the voice actors. Try to turn down the music some. But yeah, bottom line is that you are making good progress. Keep up the good work my boy!

Kelsland responds:

Thanks im trying to keep improving glad to know im getting better

I really do appreciate the fast and fluid animation. It fits perfectly for a submission about stickmen fighting with swords and everything! However it is a bit short, but that is more of a nitpick than anything else. It's ok for what it is. Keep up the good work!

MrShoeShine7 responds:

Thanks!

I get that this is suppose to be a teaser and everything, but that is no excuse to be submitting something this short under judgement. Especially with so little going on in your teaser. Something like this would be getting a really low score if not blamed. I strongly recommend posting this in your dumping grounds. It is the button next to your messages button. And with it, you can show this off to your friends, family, fans, etc with no problem. So please do that instead. Don't take this as spite, I'm just saying.

This was pretty good! I really did like this one! The animation itself was pretty fast and fluid, which I really do appreciate seeing how you were inspired by Eddsworld. Though the artwork is ok at best in my opinion, but that is obviously not the focus here. The story itself is pretty interesting seeing how it's about cartoons trying to create cartoons. A cartoonception lol! And I really do love the humor here. With the inside jokes and everything xD! However, if there was one nitpick I have with this is that it doesn't really have much of an identity. I know you were inspired by Eddsworld and everything, but still. Not to say it's bad because Eddsworld is a pretty great series, I'm just saying it would be really amazing if you could use different formulas in your series that a lot of folks would not see coming. Even though this is a good submission, it's just a little bit predictable. But that's just what I think. It's still a pretty funny submission, and I hope you keep working hard on this episode. Good luck!

AnimationCrave responds:

Thanks for the feedback and tips! And yea, eddsworld was a big inspiration, along with South Park lol.

Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!

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