I'll admit the voice acting is pretty hilarious lol. I can tell you all were trying hard with it. Though the lack of animation is what really hurts this submission some. I hope you plan on adding animation to your work in the near future because it's really needed. Wish you the best of luck!
Edit: I can tell you're new here, so I should tell you how Newgrounds works. When you submit movies/games, they go through what's called "Under Judgement". Which means they are meant to be judged, and folks can say whatever they want about it. And if you honestly have a problem with it, then I don't know what to tell you. Sorry to burst your bubble here, but other people would've.