This was ok overall. While I'm not a fan of tween animation, it was ok here. I think the biggest problem is that the writing is pretty dull. There were many scenes that could've been cut short, especially at around 2:10. Sorry, but awkward pauses are not funny for the most part. They could work if there is an actual good joke beforehand, but there isn't. There really wasn't that many jokes in this, and it's suppose to be a comedy. In my opinion, you could bring down the ego a bit with you plastering yourself all over the place. Now the best part of this is the mix between animation and live action. I thought it was pretty good here and I bet you had to do several takes during the live action segments. I can tell you got talent, it just needs to be improved on. I wish you the best of luck!