Did you forget to put in your lines for this animation? Because your character was saying nothing despite his lips moving. Be careful next time.
Did you forget to put in your lines for this animation? Because your character was saying nothing despite his lips moving. Be careful next time.
Poor Spongebob got Ed Edd 'n Eddy'd lol. Pretty hilarious animation btw! :)
While the overall quality needs to improve in general, the biggest problem in my opinion is the intro which takes up like 1/3 of the video. With this submission being like 2 1/2 minutes long, the intro should be 20 seconds or less. Keep that in mind next time when you make another part.
The whole thing altogether seemed pretty bizarre. It felt like 2 different videos got mashed up together. Not sure if I'm a fan of that, but I did love the analog horror stuff going on here. Even got me with that little jumpscare near the end, so I'll give you credit for that. Keep up the good work!
Thank you! I'm always receptive to feedback! How would I more organically link together my two parts? Also, this is a reupload of my series on YouTube for Newgrounds so I cannot improve past the 5th episode.
Jackass did say not to try these stunts at home. Kids just don't learn. lol
Still better than my summer day on the sun itself. It's way too hot up there.
This feels like old school newgrounds, and I love old school newgrounds! Also good job with the animation. Keep up the good work! :)
Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!
Age 29, Male
Animator
United States
Joined on 6/13/14