ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dungeons And Kobolds]

First of all, I wanna say that this is some of the smoothest animation I've seen on this website in a long time. Every piece of movement was fluent and all the body proportions were in place. I can only imagine how long this actually took to make. However, the biggest problem here is the lack of audio in most areas, especially the intro. You could put royalty free music in your intro if you can. Also the lack of voice acting can be pretty distracting in my opinion. Whether or not it was intentional, I just don't think it works out well with amazing quality animation like this. You can either have voice acting or go silent with body language as a means to communicate. If you do want voice acting, there are forums on this site that lets you communicate with potential voice actors. With all this said, this was a pretty great submission. It just needs to be polished more in the audio department. Hope to see more from you in the future. :)

Tevart responds:

Hello, thanks for watching the video and for the comment.
This is the first video I made, but I'm working hard to improve.
You're right, the sound is very bad and I can't find music that fits. Regarding the voices, the NewGrouns community is very good, I hope to find help.
Sorry for my English.

[All Your Matts Are Belong To Us]

If I was you, I'd probably put an epileptic seizure warning in your description. Plenty of flashing and fast moving imagery going on.

[No Cat]

This almost feels like an idea for a chicken noodle soup commercial at a superbowl lol. Pretty funny man.

Unabated responds:

I am glad you really appreciated it. Thank you.

[Sonic Forgot to Make Up His Bed. He lives to regret it.]

There is quite a bit that needs to be improved on. The biggest problem I think is there are so many scenes that go on for a long time in utter silence. This video could've been like 30 seconds to a minute shorter if most scenes didn't drag out for too long. And speaking of silence, I would strongly recommend music if there is gonna be pauses. The silence just makes it awkward. Another thing is how you made the video. I don't know what program you used, but if it's a flash file, I recommend Swivel so you don't have to use a screen recording program. It's free so it should be no problem to get. And finally the sprite animation in general really needs improvement here. Not a whole lot of movement going on here. In conclusion, while you have the basic idea on how to make content, there is plenty to learn and I hope to see you improve. Good luck!

SonicWackyspeed responds:

June edit
Just to add, it lags on mobile. Still trying to fix that.
Thanks for the feedback. I do understand where you are coming from seeing as I made this in 2 days, using scratch. After all, this is my fist sprite animation over 10 seconds so I'm pretty new to this.
October edit
Here's a new file.

[Infutile]

Rugrats in a nutshell.

[Bowser is Fucking Pissed.]

Pretty hilarious. Keep up the good work, and congrats to the voice actors here. They really gave it their all. :)

[Mental Murder Mystery]

Got some really fast, energetic animation going on here. Love it! :)

GerritTime responds:

thanks man :)