ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Forward]

Damn, what can I say? Beautiful. :)

[My first 3d animation]

Well the only thing I could criticize is that even though it's your first animation, their needs to be more to it than just 2 guys right beside each other. Otherwise, this is pretty good. Keep it up!

[GameON -Intro-]

Very nice. Think I'll stick with ya during your series. :)

[A True Story]

Wtf? lmfao XD

TMJBtv responds:

I....I really wish I knew....

[Mk Vs Db Z Outworld Missi]

Where do I start:

1. The animation is too choppy. It really needs work.

2. Alot of the backgrounds were small to the point of seeing white on the sides. Learn to stretch out the backgrounds.

3. Make sure the dialogue is in the camera shots at all times. Sometimes the words are cut off, so you don't know what they're saying.

4. I'd recommend Swivel so your animation is not on loop.

Hope you read this and take my advice.

danielsdominick91 responds:

I'm not done the next part yet,but I'm working on it

[Toilet Paper]

You can't have the title and description in english, and the video in another language. Either keep it in 1 language, or use both at the same time.

By the way at 00:06, you got some tears that shouldn't be there.

PolloChidoman responds:

Thanks for the feedback!