ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Five Nights At Yoshi's 3 Ending (FANMADE)]

Well, I can see why your videos keep getting blamed. And since you are asking for criticism, here we go:
1. This is something small, but I'd recommend Swivel so that you can control the volume on your video, and even go in full screen if you want.
2. Speaking of volume, the audio is REALLY bad here. The voice acting could be alot better, and every bit of it could've been turned down some.
3. Same thing can be said for the music.
4. I'm not expecting much, but some kind of background would be nice instead of just pure black.
5. The animation really needs work here as well.

So there you go. Some criticism that I hope will help you improve in the new year of 2016. Another thing is you shouldn't tell people on what rating to give you. Alot of people would give you a 0-1 just because of that. So be careful on what you say. And as for this video in general, well lets just say history will repeat itself. Hope you do good in the future. Good luck!

MuppetProtesterClock responds:

I wish I knew how to improve the audio, but I'm not quite sure how...

But I think I can fix the rest.

I've heard of Swivel, and maybe I CAN use that.

I only have about a year and a half of Flash experience anyway...

I fixed the audio problem by using MP3's instead of WAV's.

[Tank-ka]

This is pretty ok for something made in 20 hours. Although the audio could've been alot better. We go from rather quiet voice acting to really loud music. Just try to even it out next time. Good luck!

[Trashman]

Well the animation isn't that amazing, but obviously that is not the focus here. The art and the shading is REALLY great man! Although their should really be some kind of audio to make it even more interesting. For what it is, I'm glad I saw this. Keep it up!

PencilPals responds:

Thanks man! Yeah next time we'll also include audio and stuff like that, this was only a little 5 day project :P

[Animation tests]

Usually I'd say animation tests shouldn't be submitted under judgement, and that there is a forum I think on here where you can post it. But these tests are REALLY well made. The animations are really great to look at. If you can make this kind of stuff now, I can't wait to see what else you can make.

ganuganu responds:

Thank you. Ya i do understand these are tests but i thought it would be good to see in portal.

[the room]

I really didn't know what to think. The animation is okay I guess, and so is the art behind it. But their should really be some kind of audio in order to get interested in this. I would've given it a 3/5 if that were the case. For what it is, it's not that bad but it's not that great either. Just try a bit more next time.

cabenda responds:

I totaly agree. now when i look at it, i can see that it needs audio.

thanks

[Paper Cube]

This is pretty legit for one of your first animations. Didn't really know what was going to happen lol. Keep on improving man! I think you will do good.

ElectroBit responds:

I will, thanks. I'm also making a 30 minute 3D animation for a school project.

[Starcrew Episode 1 | Initiation]

When you said over a year, you were not kidding. I can see that ALOT of effort was put into this! Great story, pretty good pixel animation. I also love the drawn frames seen from time to time in contrast to its pixel frames. The only thing I can say is that the voice acting can get a bit too quiet sometimes, but this is just nit-pick. I don't have any other problems with this video at all! So I give it 5/5! And I'll continue to support you in the future. Good job man!

[LumberHax!]

One thing I can say is you really need to work on your pacing. It goes by way too fast. And the animation could use some work too. Just try harder next time. Good luck!

HoobaAnimations responds:

Thank you for your constructive criticism, your comment also gave me more energy
to start working on my next one.
And yes next time I will work on my pacing!