It's decent. Though try to make longer videos next time. Good luck.
It's decent. Though try to make longer videos next time. Good luck.
Very nice animation. Also very nice humor too. Keep it up. lol
Pretty neat for your 1st animation. Not to mention it was pretty cute. Keep it up. :)
It's no wonder you got front page. This was amazing work. Really hope you make more. Keep it up! :)
Thanks man! :'DD
Though the animation is decent, the lip sync could use some work. The art is also pretty good too. I'd recommend Swivel so the animation is not on loop. But still, keep it up!
Normally I don't recommend MS Paint videos on Newgrounds, but this wasn't so bad at all. It was very good. Though this could have used more animation to it other than lip sync. Still, pretty good.
Some music would have been nice. Still, pretty legit animation.
Where do I start. You really need to stretch out backgrounds because you can see white in half of them. The art work really needs more effort put into it, not to mention the animation. Although the artwork for the Halo suits and guns are pretty legit, but that is not enough to give this a good rating. But seeing how you at least tried to make a legit movie, I'll give you 2/5. Just try harder next time. Good luck!
I just noticed that the white background is not supposed to happen. I'm trying to fix it now. I'm changing the file to an mp4.
Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!
Age 28, Male
Animator
United States
Joined on 6/13/14