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    Poor Tails. But yeah, this seems pretty epic. Can't wait to see it. :)

    CosmicTornado responds:

    Thanks. I can't wait to start working on the first episode! But for now I'm pretty exhausted, so I'll wait until Monday or so to start working on it.

    I'm sorry, but this could be alot better. Granted I like sprite movies and the music, but this was just boring. It was pretty much nothing but dialog. If it's going to be dialog, at-least put more sound into it than just music. Like maybe put in animal sounds or mumbling when they're talking. And if there is a sprite sheet for these characters, please use it so they wont just be still and with mouths moving. Just try harder next time. Good luck!

    Well this was pretty decent for a first animation, but there are some problems.
    1. In some scenes, their was white showing on the edges of backgrounds. You should try to stretch out backgrounds a bit more.
    2. It's kinda weird to have voices in this and yet still have text boxes. I'd recommend sticking with only one of them.
    3. At 00:23, If that is suppose to be smoke, then you need to learn how to make it fade out instead of having it just stick there for the rest of the video.
    4. There could be more animation in the sprites.

    Just keep on trying, and you'll be a great animator. Good luck!

    DDO-Productions responds:

    Thanks!

    Lip-sync was pretty decent, though more face expressions would be nice. Just keep improving. Good luck!

    This is one of the best 3D films I've seen on Newgrounds so far. The textures were amazing in its own style. The story was pretty good too. And the music fits in everything perfectly. 5 Stars. :)

    This isnt too bad, but the pivot animation can be alot smoother than that. But you seem like you can improve, so I wish you the best of luck.

    Well this aint short or nothing, but there should be more to it than just him walking to a pyramid. Also their could be more animation to it than just a walking cycle. Just try harder next time. Good luck!

    I understand that it's good to teach another language, but Newgrounds is a website where you can make anything you want as long as it's entertaining. And their seems to be no entertainment going on here. And that is the problem. I'm just saying don't be surprised if this gets blamed. I do hope you make something that will catch viewer's attention. Good luck!

    I love the animation style. And the music is very nice to listen. Hope you make more like this. :)

    P4DDDY responds:

    Thanks! I do have a number of projects lined up :)

    Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!

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