ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[BSPN]

Well I'm lost for words. lmao

[cupid the thief]

While the animation and music is pretty good to say the least, this came with some problems. The artwork could've been done better. Their were parts where black lines are crossing over objects. The backgrounds could've been stretched out more because you could see white down at the bottom. Be careful with that. And finally, there were parts where certain sound effects could've been added, like the helicopter for example. Just try harder next time. Good luck!

[Divided Nations Episode1]

Well I know you say this is an older animation and all, but it's not much of an excuse. I will say I am on the line with this. It's nothing great but it's nothing terrible either.

MuricanSatire responds:

Yeah, but this is back when I literally had no clue what I was doing. Thanks for the feed back anyway though. I'll upload the newer ones soon enough, All of them are on YouTube if you care to watch,links on the channel page, You don't have to though.

[UNDERTALE SPOOKWAVE/TUNE TRAP REMIX]

Buddy I'm sorry, but this type of video shouldn't even be on here. On Newgrounds, we expect to see some kind of originality in any kind of video. And frankly, there is hardly anything original about this at all. It may be fine on YouTube, but not here. The remix is ok I guess, but it wont be enough for this to be a good video. Don't be surprised if this gets blamed.

[Five Nights At Yoshi's 3 Ending (FANMADE)]

Well, I can see why your videos keep getting blamed. And since you are asking for criticism, here we go:
1. This is something small, but I'd recommend Swivel so that you can control the volume on your video, and even go in full screen if you want.
2. Speaking of volume, the audio is REALLY bad here. The voice acting could be alot better, and every bit of it could've been turned down some.
3. Same thing can be said for the music.
4. I'm not expecting much, but some kind of background would be nice instead of just pure black.
5. The animation really needs work here as well.

So there you go. Some criticism that I hope will help you improve in the new year of 2016. Another thing is you shouldn't tell people on what rating to give you. Alot of people would give you a 0-1 just because of that. So be careful on what you say. And as for this video in general, well lets just say history will repeat itself. Hope you do good in the future. Good luck!

MuppetProtesterClock responds:

I wish I knew how to improve the audio, but I'm not quite sure how...

But I think I can fix the rest.

I've heard of Swivel, and maybe I CAN use that.

I only have about a year and a half of Flash experience anyway...

I fixed the audio problem by using MP3's instead of WAV's.

[Tank-ka]

This is pretty ok for something made in 20 hours. Although the audio could've been alot better. We go from rather quiet voice acting to really loud music. Just try to even it out next time. Good luck!

[Trashman]

Well the animation isn't that amazing, but obviously that is not the focus here. The art and the shading is REALLY great man! Although their should really be some kind of audio to make it even more interesting. For what it is, I'm glad I saw this. Keep it up!

PencilPals responds:

Thanks man! Yeah next time we'll also include audio and stuff like that, this was only a little 5 day project :P

[Animation tests]

Usually I'd say animation tests shouldn't be submitted under judgement, and that there is a forum I think on here where you can post it. But these tests are REALLY well made. The animations are really great to look at. If you can make this kind of stuff now, I can't wait to see what else you can make.

ganuganu responds:

Thank you. Ya i do understand these are tests but i thought it would be good to see in portal.

[the room]

I really didn't know what to think. The animation is okay I guess, and so is the art behind it. But their should really be some kind of audio in order to get interested in this. I would've given it a 3/5 if that were the case. For what it is, it's not that bad but it's not that great either. Just try a bit more next time.

cabenda responds:

I totaly agree. now when i look at it, i can see that it needs audio.

thanks