ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Walabie The Rabbit & The Bronson Boys Part 2]

That was pretty funny lol. Especially love the part with the old guy and the kid. I can see why "dark" was one of your tags xD. But anyway, the animation was legit for the style you're going for, the art was pretty impressive, and again this was really funny! Keep up the great work! :)

oldmanorange responds:

Thanks a bunch for really digging the whole thing. The old guy and his poor son always make me laugh. Ha ha. Yah I feel this animation style is really the only way to pump out sorta longer episodes, which really still take quite a bit of time... But oh well, It's still making progress. Thanks again.

[Orange Combat (Remake) ep.1]

It's really nothing special, but it was pretty legit. Though I do recommend working on the line-work. Although art is pretty subjective as far as animation goes, maybe some outlines between the sky and ground wouldn't hurt. And even around the leaves on the tree. I'm just saying.

[The Button on the Desk!]

It was pretty good for a college project. Very cute indeed. I hope everybody involve continues to keep working hard and make something amazing in the near future! :)

Intrapath responds:

Thanks! We've already had 1 member of the team graduate last year, and most of the remaining members will be graduating this school year, so I'm sure they will!

[Why Subscribe? Lumpy Biscuits Promo (New Welcome Trailer)]

Got a good looking tablet there! lol

But yeah, looking forward to your tips and such. I know plenty of animators that are just starting out, and you can show them a few things. :)

LumpyBiscuits responds:

thanks m9

[Eddsworld Animation Test]

Not bad for a test, but something like this would be better off in the Dumping Grounds rather than under judgement. The dumping grounds is next to your message button. Try using that instead.

[The Odd Berry Squad!]

I will admit I appreciate the fact you're open to criticism as most folks are not. So with that said, obviously this has problems:

1. Nothing really felt authentic with the art in general. Almost everything seemed like it was nothing more than copying and pasting. Even the character designs look like that due to there being some white line around their limbs. I can't say if you been copying everything or not. If so, learn to draw out your characters, props, etc. And if you are not, then be careful on how you draw.
2. Speaking of drawing, please make at least a few more backgrounds instead of just using the same one in different shots. Especially at the end with everybody outside. It makes you look lazy.
3. There are some parts that went on for too long, especially with that awkward black joke. 13 seconds of dead air is not funny.
4. I recommend you learn how to do animation fps instead of tweening everything. Although I have seen tween animation done good before, this is not how to do it. So please try a different animation style.

Now I do give you a 2/5 rating because there is some good in this. The voice acting is good-ish for the most part, although I think it could be improved with the help of Audacity. And the lip-sync is actually pretty spot on! But that's really about it. Everything else holds you back. Now I understand you are a beginner animator, so please take my advice and try to improve. You do have potential, so I really hope you make good quality in the near future. Good luck!

kcdawg13 responds:

Thank you very much for your criticism. I currently use Anime Studio, which isn't very good for animating, especially for artists that like drawing their characters and props, etc. I drew everything in Photoshop aside from the Shotgun, I'm attempting re-draw all the characters and such and make them look more crisp. I hope to branch out into Flash or ToonBoom in the very close future. Sadly right now I am currently stuck with this, mainly because my computer sucks and can't handle anything.

Again, thank you very much. I really do appreciate it.

[Undertale - The Twin Souls [Part 1]]

Love the animation style. Reminds me of Eddsworld! And yeah, this was pretty interesting to watch! Makes me curious on what is gonna happen next. Keep up the good work! :)