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[Ryu vs Ken Short animation]

I won't lie, this was pretty good for a test and your 1st animation. The animation and the sound effects were all on key for the most part. Though at certain frames with one of the street fighters, there was this white line next to him. Be sure to always check and erase any white lines when dealing with your sprites. Just a nitpick, but some music would've been nice to have. It'd help make your submission engaging. Since this is a test, It's not a good idea to be putting tests under judgement. These types of submissions would get a low score if not blamed. There is a place called the Dumping Grounds where you can post tests at. It is the button next to your message button. And with it you can show your movie off to your friends, family, fans, etc. So please use that next time. But even then, I think the submission will hold up. You got a long way ahead of you, and I hope you improve and evolve as time goes on. Good luck!

RandomMugen responds:

That's good advice, thank you! I'll use your advice for future use and improve! Also, about those white lines...for some reason they appear. I don't really know how to get rid of them in pivot Since that's the program I use. Another problem is that I'm trying to have the music play and the sound effects in windows live movie maker at the same time. If you got any suggestions that will help, please respond!

[Dokuroshima 2 Pt. 1]

Some of the nitpicks I have with this submission is that the voice acting could've been a little bit better. It got pretty emotionless at times. Not to mention it got really quiet in certain parts. The music shouldn't be louder than the voice acting. Also I think some more facial expressions wouldn't hurt to have. But aside from that, this was really good. The artwork is pretty good in my opinion. The animation can be a little bit trippy, but that's what makes it interesting. The music is really amazing and everything. And the effects were honestly mind blowing. The part where they go into some matrix-like world was really great! This was great for what it is, and I hope you continue to make more. Good luck!

AoiShinigami responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I'll make sure I keep on upgrading the quality even further as I continue the series :D

[NEW START]

I'll give you credit for the animation because it was pretty legit for the most part, but this has problems:

1. Please learn to stretch out your backgrounds. There were too many white edges being exposed here. Even a black edge in one part?
2. If you're going to use text, please learn to give it extra time for people to read. A lot of it goes by way too fast, so nobody can read it.
3. I strongly recommend Swivel so that your animation is not on loop. It's a free program, so it should be no problem to get.

Also this is just a nitpick, but please learn how to word out your sentences in your Author Comments section. I'm usually not much of a grammar nazi, but half of it I could barely even understand. It doesn't have to be perfect, it just needs to be understandable.

Now don't think I'm hating on you. I'm only giving out constructive criticism. And I hope you take my advice and try to improve in the future. And I hope you do. Good luck!

[Surviving A Bear Attack]

A very informative video! Also love the cute art style, good animation, and the great voice for the content. Keep up the good work! :)

Curiosity180 responds:

We are glad the art style is something people are liking. Thank you!

[Boboiboy Kuasa 7 Parody]

You know a stick animation is going to be great if it comes from Dojo. And this piece of gold is a good example. I love the animation, the art, the color scheme, and any effects you put into this! My next favorite. Keep up the amazing work! :)