I get that this is suppose to be a teaser and everything, but that is no excuse to be submitting something this short under judgement. Especially with so little going on in your teaser. Something like this would be getting a really low score if not blamed. I strongly recommend posting this in your dumping grounds. It is the button next to your messages button. And with it, you can show this off to your friends, family, fans, etc with no problem. So please do that instead. Don't take this as spite, I'm just saying.