ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The caravan - I : Pilot]

There are pros and cons with this submission. The animation and the artwork is pretty good and creative. Even the music is really good too. However, if you're going to use text instead of voice acting, at least make the words stay on screen a couple seconds longer. Some of the dialogue went by too fast. Also try to work on your grammar because some of it was a bit off. For what it is, the video is pretty good. Keep up the good work!

0man0 responds:

Well, thank you for the feedback. I'm not a native English speaker, so I can't make all the characters sound like they are born in other place, because in that case they would not speak English. And same goes about my grammar, but hey, you have been REALLY helpful because... I forgot about it. I will be careful about it, but now I realize that I have been very stupid. I make mistakes very often, but at least in a video I should correct them. And about the dialogue, for some reason, before publishing it, I said it's too long on the screen and I've deleted 25% of every line time. Thank you. You have been way more helpful than you thought you are.

[BLUE SKIN - MUSIC VIDEO]

Pretty great music video! The animation, and the artwork is pretty good and everything. I even give extra points just for having Snoopy in this. Wasn't expecting him at all lol. Keep up the good work! :)

Wondermeow responds:

Thankyou ^^

[Living panda]

It's a simple premise, but the line-work was amazing especially with the panda! Although the animation could've been just a little bit better. It's weird because the animation for the first 20 seconds was pretty spot on, but afterwards it's like it wasn't even finished or something. This is just a nitpick though, as the video still holds up! Keep up the good work!

Melankoliskkatt responds:

Hey! Thanks for your input :). Yeah your eyes are quite spot on. The last bit was my first sketch and it ended up with being just like that, could have put down more time to it

[Ice Cream Thoughts]

Pretty legit for one of your 1st animations. Simple and basic, but still enjoyable. Not bad my boy! Keep it up.

[Pokémon-The Real Ending]

Pretty good video my boy! Love the animation, color scheme, artwork, humor, etc. Keep it up! :)

DIWAKAR responds:

Thank you

[Cyber Fruits]

"This is just a short animation cuz I want to understand if it is worth of moving on this series."

Well in newgrounds terms, 3 minutes and 49 seconds isn't exactly short. If that's the case, then those 10 second intros would be gone in a blink of an eye lol. But yeah it is worth keeping this series going because it is amazing! I love the animation, artwork, color scheme, music, and so on. Even the little bit of voice acting is worth it! Keep it up because this is my next favorite. :)

eLLoWorlds responds:

Yeah I need to stop doing those long intros eheheh.

Thank you Shae that was really enjoyable to read :)

[Toons These Days: Ep 67]

You never fail to make good content Doodley! Good to see even Doggy likes Wander over Yonder. :)