So we finally meet again after about a year, and I do have to say you got better quite a bit. While the pacing isn't exactly perfect, it is better than your patreon animation. Though I can tell you're changing your voice to sound like the girl here, at least you do a good job with it. And it's much better than subtitles. Your animation and artwork has improved quite a bit from what I can tell. However, the one big nitpick I have here is that sometimes the music is louder than the voice actors. Try to turn down the music some. But yeah, bottom line is that you are making good progress. Keep up the good work my boy!