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So we finally meet again after about a year, and I do have to say you got better quite a bit. While the pacing isn't exactly perfect, it is better than your patreon animation. Though I can tell you're changing your voice to sound like the girl here, at least you do a good job with it. And it's much better than subtitles. Your animation and artwork has improved quite a bit from what I can tell. However, the one big nitpick I have here is that sometimes the music is louder than the voice actors. Try to turn down the music some. But yeah, bottom line is that you are making good progress. Keep up the good work my boy!

Kelsland responds:

Thanks im trying to keep improving glad to know im getting better

I really do appreciate the fast and fluid animation. It fits perfectly for a submission about stickmen fighting with swords and everything! However it is a bit short, but that is more of a nitpick than anything else. It's ok for what it is. Keep up the good work!

MrShoeShine7 responds:

Thanks!

I get that this is suppose to be a teaser and everything, but that is no excuse to be submitting something this short under judgement. Especially with so little going on in your teaser. Something like this would be getting a really low score if not blamed. I strongly recommend posting this in your dumping grounds. It is the button next to your messages button. And with it, you can show this off to your friends, family, fans, etc with no problem. So please do that instead. Don't take this as spite, I'm just saying.

This was pretty good! I really did like this one! The animation itself was pretty fast and fluid, which I really do appreciate seeing how you were inspired by Eddsworld. Though the artwork is ok at best in my opinion, but that is obviously not the focus here. The story itself is pretty interesting seeing how it's about cartoons trying to create cartoons. A cartoonception lol! And I really do love the humor here. With the inside jokes and everything xD! However, if there was one nitpick I have with this is that it doesn't really have much of an identity. I know you were inspired by Eddsworld and everything, but still. Not to say it's bad because Eddsworld is a pretty great series, I'm just saying it would be really amazing if you could use different formulas in your series that a lot of folks would not see coming. Even though this is a good submission, it's just a little bit predictable. But that's just what I think. It's still a pretty funny submission, and I hope you keep working hard on this episode. Good luck!

AnimationCrave responds:

Thanks for the feedback and tips! And yea, eddsworld was a big inspiration, along with South Park lol.

I would criticize this submission, but it's really hard telling if you were being legit while making this, or you just didn't really care at all. Not even sure how to feel about this. :/

TheGarbageCanMan responds:

Hey, I'm 15. I'm just being as weird as I CAN GET!!! I have another series coming out soon and the animation as well as the story is way better. This series will continue to be animated like this. You can find all mu animated series on IMDb by typing Preston Hazard!

Just like a lot of epic sprite submissions I've seen on Newgrounds. The sprite animation is fluid and fast, any effects you were using were all spot on, and the pacing matches the action perfectly. Although the animation was just a little bit short for content like this, but that is just a nitpick. I had a great time watching this, and I hope everybody else does too! :)

The overall quality of this submission seems to be hit and miss. The artwork in this is ok at best in my opinion, especially since this content is suppose to be a joke or something. But even then, backgrounds would be nice to have instead of leaving everything just white. Besides the lip-syncing and eye movements, there is really no other form of animation going on here. There is no excuse not to have the overall characters move in general. While I will admit some of the voice acting is pretty hilarious to be honest, I strongly do recommend audacity just to make the lines in the start of the video more decent and not sounding like you blew out the microphone. But yeah, bottom line here is that this submission is average at best. It's nothing that bad, but it could've been better. I hope you can try to improve in the future using some of the advice I gave you. Good luck!

Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!

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