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That was pretty hilarious! But yeah, really love this one! The animation is great for its comedic effect, the artwork is just amazing in my opinion, and the voice acting was pretty funny! I really love Halloween, so I have a soft spot for animations like this. My next favorite! Keep up the amazing work! :)

Your series just gets better and better. Love the effort put into this! :)

jerbjpg responds:

Thanks for continuing to watch ShaeGuy!

That was pretty great. The animation and the line-work is pretty good, and the humor is funny. Made me laugh at the end lol. Keep up the good work!

braindog75 responds:

Thanks man !

I really did enjoy this one! I really adore the character designs, and with everything drawn being basic made it work to its advantage. A lot of the voice actors were pretty good for the most part, and the humor was pretty great! I love the quirks here and there like with the planet of the apes reference lol. Also love the choices with the music. I really adore disco, especially "Disco Inferno" being played at the end. Overall, this was amazing! My next favorite! Keep up the amazing work! :)

I'll give you 2/5 for the effort that was put into this at least, but this has problems:

1. If you really want to work with stop-motion I highly recommend you use objects such as clay, legos, or anything that can move its arms and legs around. Using random objects that cannot move anything around isn't really a good idea. It's all about giving the illusion of your characters being alive.
2. Try to get a microphone for voice acting instead of just using written paper for dialogue. Or at least try to get voice actors that can help you. There are plenty on Newgrounds that can give a helping hand.
3. I recommend swivel so your stop-motion video is not on loop. It's free so it should be no problem to get.
4. When it comes to stop-motion, it is very important to keep everybody out of the frames period. So if there is even so much as a human thumb in the frames, it will ruin the experience of the video. Unless if it's part of the story or something, there is no excuse for it.
5. Sort of a nit-pick, but the frames in the video are going too fast. Either add more frames to make the stop-motion smoother, or slow it down some.

Now don't think I'm hating on you. I'm only giving out constructive criticism because I know you have potential to make something great. Please take my advice and try to improve. And I know you can improve seeing the energy that was put into making this. Good luck!

hreyas responds:

Points taken but the fact is it all all came all of a sudden , which is why i could make it in lesser time , a clay animation would have took more time. Collab would have taken more time.Swivel isnt compatible on either of my computers.It was made in Ipad ,so still figuring out how to make it better the next time , and moreover the place i live in , I have seriously nobody from the same domain who can understand the values from the direction point of view, my mother helped me , I mean.Making it without any possible serious help , i must say it was very very frustating to see those occuring bodies in the frame, I am not whining but the truth is it was a pain in the ass to make this

Wasn't too bad for your 1st animation on Newgrounds. Just keep on improving your content, and I think you can make something really amazing. lol

Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!

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