ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Uliland: SuS!]

You got some animation skills here, it just needs to be improved on. Not to mention the background art as well. I think the biggest issue is the lack of audio. You'd be amazed how better a submission would be if given any kind of audio instead of it being silent.

[Sonic Kills Metal Sonic for Animal Abuse]

I do like the animation and linework here. It seems smooth and detailed, but it also feels unfinished. If this is unfinished, I wouldn't recommend posting it under judgement. Wait until everything is polished and good. Also audio of any kind would really help this out. You got some talent here, it just needs to be improved on. Good luck!

ZykicoBeast responds:

It's finished!! Thanks for the feedback.

[Best Friends]

Stop motion is pretty fluid and smooth. Not bad for only practice! I can only imagine the actual legit projects you end up doing. Keep up the amazing work! :)

[Kinda in the Middle]

This feels like something you'd see on nicktoons. Really love how smooth the 3D animation is, and not to mention a rather cute design with the squirrel. It's amazing how simple animation tests can be turned into something really great! Keep up the amazing work! :)

[The Senses Song: 300 Sub Special Edition]

The animation is actually decent here, but I'd recommend you get a better animation program like Flash 8. It'd help smooth the outlines so it doesn't look so rushed. Speaking of which, you should have mouth movements here. It doesn't have to be perfectly lip synced, the mouths just need to move up and down. And lastly you should make legit backgrounds. It doesn't have to be amazing either, but it'd be better than having single colored backgrounds. You got some talent here, it just needs to be improved on. Good luck!

littleMAHER1 responds:

I will say that I animated this on a phone which explains why it looks rushed
I am looking for a proper animation program now that I got a computer
the background was a choice because in the orignal video there is not really a background but I will keep that in mind
The mouth movement I am on the fence on tho but I will think about it
thanks for you're constructive criticism I will keep all of this in mind!

[The Falling Heart in the Sky]

I can see why this took a long time to make. I adore how a few different styles of media was mashed together in this. The 2D, 3D, and live action all worked really well in this! Also the voice acting felt pretty believable here. It was rather emotional to see. Good job to everyone that worked on this. Hope to see it on front page! :)

[StickSchool Episode 4: Masterpiece Theif]

I can tell you're new so I'll give you some credit. You seem to have some skill, but I'd recommend a better animation program to use. There were so many animation errors in this that I don't even really need to explain as it's pretty obvious when you watch this. The best I can say for now is keep on practicing and improving. You got some potential that is waiting to burst out and amaze everyone here. Good luck!

StickSchoolStudios responds:

thanks, I use FlipaClip so sometimes it glitches. Most recent episodes should be better

[Cosmic Stars and Beyond the Freeway]

I can see a lot of effort was put into this. I think my favorite thing was the 3D spaceship you were using. I love it when 3D can mix well with 2D content lol. Also some of the character designs were pretty creative, particularly the alien designs. Hope to see this continue! :)

HarisTheGodBear responds:

Thank you kindly good sir

[SO A MOUSE WALKS INTO A BAR]

What can I say, it's just simply perfection. I loved every bit of animation, art, and character designs that was put into this. Everyone that was involved should be proud! Hope to see this on front page! :)

[Stanpai Visual Character Demo]

Got plenty of talent mate! Especially love your "Pepe le Pew" accent in your 1st voice over. Hope you get plenty of work in the near future. :)

Stanpai responds:

Thank you!