ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[hey where is Perry?]

While the animation is ok for your 1st time making something, I would not recommend submitting a video this short under judgement. I recommend posting it to Dumping Grounds. It is the button next to your message button. And with it, you can show off your submission to your friends, family, fans, etc. So please do that instead. I doubt this submission will even get passed judgement, but if so, congratulations.

AmitAyalon responds:

how can i do that?

[Valley of Tales - Chapter 1: Suspicious Tree]

This was pretty great! I really do adore the cartoon-like textures for this 3D animation. It really makes it stand out in a way. Although I'm not a big fan of speakonia-like voices, and I would recommend having voice actors instead. Also maybe some more facial expressions would be nice, especially with the eyes. But these are just nitpicks. I assume the video is suppose to be weird that way, but I thought I'd point it out. But again, I love the textures, the animation is pretty fluid for the most part, and the music is really nice. Keep up the good work! :)

Lyrog responds:

Thank you! About the voices, I would also prefer to have actual voice actors. But I live in the south of Europe everyone here has a retarded accent. I would have to find someone over the Internet from UK or USA. I don't know, maybe in the future. But yes, it is supposed to be weird in a way and I'm keeping it this way for now. Glad you liked the music :)

[#souljaboychallenge]

Pretty hilarious for the most part. The animation is nothing special, but I did like the artwork for this submission. And again, the dialogue is pretty funny. Not bad!

[How big is the UNIVERSE?]

Love it! This informative submission hits home for me. I use to love everything about space when I was a kid, and this brought back good memories. Thanks for the nostalgia! :)

[IEEmagnet - GatorWorks (OFFICIAL MUSIC VIDEO)]

That was pretty good. The animation is fluid for the most part, and the artwork is rather creative in my opinion. Love the mix of everything from real pictures to drawings lol. The music itself really isn't anything that amazing (especially with it being repeated over and over), but it's still a legit beat. It's a fine submission for what it is. Keep up the good work!

[7 Fragments]

I will admit some of these pieces of animation were pretty legit and everything, but something like this would be better off in the dumping grounds rather than being submitted under judgement. Anything under judgement will have to be a legit animation project instead of experimental animation tests. Those type of videos would likely get a low score if not blamed. Although I'm sure this submission will be saved and everything, but still. Also a nitpick, but any kind of audio would be nice. Music, sound effects, etc would really help make your video more engaging. Without audio, your submission will may come off as boring to a lot of people. It's ok for what it is, but just remember to put content like this in the dumping grounds next time. I'm just saying.

[Downfall]

Well I do appreciate the moral here I'll give you that, but that's really about it. The animation is pretty average at best, but I assume that is not the main focus here. It's the moral that is the focus. Again, I really do appreciate it. :)

thekmanproductions responds:

Thank you! I am learning animation, I do not have a drawing tablet yet, so its a bit choppy. I figured Newgrounds was about community and creation, so I wanted to share my journey of learning flash and at the same time; wanted to share a message. :)

[Animoid (Promo)]

This was pretty great! The artwork is legit in my opinion, the line work is pretty good, and the color scheme was alright. However, this may be nitpicking but the animation tends to be hit or miss. While some parts of the animation looks really amazing, other times it looks a bit off. I could be wrong, but it seems you were trying to do tweening and frame-by-frame at the same time. If that's the case, I recommend you do only one or the other. It just looks pretty trippy in my opinion. But again, everything else holds up. It is a pretty good submission. Keep up the good work!