ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Story of Moldylocks]

A really amazing, and hilarious submission! The animation basically knows when to either slow down, or be fast paced for the comedic timing. The art and linework is especially good in my opinion! It all basically fits into the comedy category. Not to mention the writing is pretty good too. Bottom line is that this is another good quality animation to check out and have a laugh at. Keep up the good work!

[Shadow's smoking problem (sonic oddshow collab entry)]

Pretty good pixel animation as most submissions like this one would normally have! Also yeah, that was pretty hilarious lmao. The only thing I can nitpick is that the animation is on loop. I recommend Swivel so the animation will be on a video player. It's free, so it should be no problem to get. But yeah, pretty good. Keep up the good work!

fahyda responds:

don't worry ive already done a conversion to mp4, but that ones going on meh youtube thanks tho

[Sok and the Bird]

Pretty impressive for your 1st animation! The animation itself is pretty good as far as comedic timing goes. While the art and line work is not amazing (Granted it is your 1st animation, so I'll give you that), it also makes everything look cute and adorable. I also love that Mario bit right at the end! Gave me a bit of nostalgia. Bottom line is that you got potential and talent to make great content! If it's this decent now, just imagine what you could make in the future. All I can say is good luck and try hard! Have fun on newgrounds! :)

Snackers responds:

Thank you! I'm working an another one currently, and so far it's looking to be much better. You're support is really appreciated man, thanks.

[Lil Neville]

I don't even know what to say here lmao. It's so strange, out of this world, and yet so mystical. What kind of message were you trying to get across here? What was Neville's motivation here? What could it all mean?......I guess we will never know. XD

[Door 2 Door Episode 2 - The Very Best]

While this submission is not that bad or anything, it's really not that enjoyable either. The art and line work can really use a lot more improvement in my opinion. Maybe having outlines in the backgrounds for example. I mean, this wouldn't be a big issue if the animation was at least smooth and looking good. But even the animation is pretty stiff for the most part. Granted there is lip-syncing (which is not bad by the way), and some movements in the characters. But still, there should be a lot more movement than that. Especially in the song sequence, it was basically just a slideshow. Any submission under judgement should never be a slideshow. Not to mention the voice acting half the time was too quiet. Learn to amplify the voices so they are loud and clear. Don't take it the wrong way, I mean you do have some talent here that has potential. You just need to improve on the overall quality of your work because it is really lacking in certain parts. I hope you take my advice, and try to get better. Good luck!

BonfireCow responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'm still learning, and if you've seen the first episode, there's a massive improvement. I know this one has a lot of flaws, but granted I had a limited deadline, there wasn't much I could do. I'll take your advice about sounds and movements, thanks.

[A Simple Task]

This was very amazing for the 2nd cartoon you ever made! I don't know if I would call the animation choppy because it does look very smooth for the most part. I really do adore the art and line work here! It's looks really great in my opinion! The robot man was a bit adorable lol. And yeah, the story here is pretty damn hilarious! If this was just another ordinary animation that you made, I would have given you a 4/5. But no, you're just starting out, and you are already making really great quality submissions! I can't even imagine how you will be in the next few years if you keep this up! You have plenty of talent that I hope blooms on here! And I can't wait to see more from you! This is my next favorite, and you just got yourself a fan! Keep up with the amazing work! :)