My issue with it is the lack of audio. Why you didn't put music in like you did on twitter I don't understand. If it was copyrighted, you could've given credit at least. It would've really make your submission stand out more. Aside from that, I really do like the art here especially the background. It looks hand drawn, and if it was I'm really impressed. You got some art skills, and I bet you'd rock in the art section of Newgrounds. Keep up the good work!