Was not expecting this to be a crossover with The Last of Us lmao. That was pretty funny! But yeah, keep up the good work! :)
Was not expecting this to be a crossover with The Last of Us lmao. That was pretty funny! But yeah, keep up the good work! :)
my mind is strange! hahaha!
Pretty relatable and down-to-earth! Animation was great, and the color scheme fits perfectly. Also it was pretty hilarious. Keep up the good work! :)
Pretty hilarious with baby yoda lol! But yeah love the animation, art, color scheme, etc. I'd love to see more from you. Keep up the good work!
It's not much, but it did get a chuckle out of me. I do enjoy simplicity sometimes, and you delivered just that. Not bad!
My only "nitpick" was that it wasn't long enough lmao. Because yeah, that was some really amazing pixel animation and art. It's exactly what I love to see with 8-bit animations. Keep up the amazing work! :)
I thought the trippy animation was pretty funny, so I'll give you that. This does have promise, so I can't wait to see it. Good luck! ;)
I can tell you put quite a bit of work into this, but we got some problems here. First of all, I really don't recommend advertising your shirts at the start of the submission. It just feels kinda forced. Either put all the information in your video description, or put it at the end of the video. Speaking of information, all the commentary throughout this animation was really not needed. All of it could be put into the video description as well. Thirdly, the lack of music really hurts this animation big time. You can find royalty free music anywhere if you searched for it on google. Another thing is somewhere in the middle, you said you lost progress due to your animation program being updated. And yeah I can tell because half the time I didn't even know what was going on. If I was you, I would've just redo the scenes you lost instead of submitting this practically unfinished. And lastly, I recommend making better backgrounds than those weird patterns. It kinda looks like you ripped them from google images (maybe you did, but what do I know?). Don't think I'm hating on you, I'm just giving some constructive criticism here because you got some talent. You just need to improve on your skills, and I hope you do. Good luck!
I guess my only nitpick is that it's not made clear on what is going on. But then again, I do love mystery lol. I hope there will be a sequel to this because I was hooked. Animation was great, the art was creative, and the music made everything suspenseful. Keep up the amazing work! :)
Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!
Age 28, Male
Animator
United States
Joined on 6/13/14