It made me laugh at a couple points, so you get a lot of credit for that. Though I will say a couple of lines could've been amplified a bit more, but it didn't keep this submission from being hilarious. Keep up the good work!
It made me laugh at a couple points, so you get a lot of credit for that. Though I will say a couple of lines could've been amplified a bit more, but it didn't keep this submission from being hilarious. Keep up the good work!
I do enjoy me some simplicity of things. Animation was cute and fluid, and the whole idea was funny. It's not much, but it will leave a smile on people's faces. :)
The animation and art was pretty great, although I don't recommend submitting unfinished animations under judgement. It's obviously meant for finished projects. If I was you, I'd put it on YouTube and make a post about it with a link. And if people like it, you can finish it and submit it here. But yeah, I do love what you're cooking up. And I'd love to see this finished in the future. Good luck!
Thanks for the tips, this is really my first post on newgrounds and im still kinda learning how the site works. i'll post this on youtube
For something that was rushed, this was alright. The animation was actually pretty good, and even some of the character designs were cool. The problem with this was most of the audio. A lot of it should've been amplified more, and you seem to not have other voice actors judging by that computerized voice. There are plenty of folks who would love to voice act on here, and some of which could even be found in your movie reviews. But either way, good job! If this was rushed, I'd love to see a project from you that you took time on. Good luck!
Thank you, your words are appreciated and I’m sure they will affect my next project positively
My one and only problem is that the voice acting should've been amplified more. The sound effects and music should not be 3 times louder than the voice acting lol. But yeah, this was pretty enjoyable. The animation was very smooth and fluid, and the art was basic and cute. Also it was pretty hilarious at points. Glad to see those 6 months paid off. Keep up the amazing work! :)
That was pretty hilarious! Especially love the backroom bit lol. The animation was on par, you had a lot of creative setups going on, and the art was impressive. Keep up the amazing work! :)
There is something about a slow fps that makes horror/creepy animations more aggressive and terrifying. And yeah, loved the animation in this btw. Also love your art too, you got a great imagination. Keep up the good work! :)
Really did love this one! The background art was very gorgeous, the character designs were very adorable, and I love the sketchy animation. Also the anime battle at the end was pretty hilarious lol. Did not expect any dialogue to be in this. Keep up the amazing work! :)
Thank you very much! :)
Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!
Age 28, Male
Animator
United States
Joined on 6/13/14