ShaeGuy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[OAK: Episode One]

You have an interesting thing going on here, but the whole submission felt a bit lackluster. Now the art itself was the best part about this video, you definitely has some drawing skills. However, the animation was really hit and miss. The walk cycles in this were pretty great, but there should definitely be mouth movements. You don't really have to lip sync, but just have the mouths move up and down like an anime or something. Another thing is that there should be more audio in this than just the voice acting. Either have some music playing in the background, or maybe outdoor sounds. Anything just to fill the void. Speaking of voice acting, make sure all the lines are amplified. Some of your voice actors were really quiet compared to others. If you don't have Audacity, I strongly recommend it. It's free and it'll help improve your lines a lot. You have potential with this, it just needs to be improved on. Good luck!

TawnyLight responds:

Hi! Thanks for your feedback! I currently have 3 episodes made, and episode 3 is edited, since that is when I was able to hire an editor!

[Clanky the Wise]

So you take drawing requests? That's nice man. :)

Barnhouse responds:

Yes I do! And I am building all my assets to launch my twitch show very soon.

[PEASHOOTER GETS IT]

Nobody likes the peashooter lol. Pretty funny video btw.

[Hey buddy chum pal friend!]

The neck snap is what got me XD! But yeah, that was pretty funny. It's nothing amazing, but it will make someone's day. :)

[Stupid Name for an Evil Sidekick]

I hope to see more of "Algore" in the near future lol! But yeah, pretty great submission. The security guard getting shot was really hilarious XD. Keep up the great work!

[Dune Animation]

Pretty solid animation! Though I think some audio would've really helped with the score, but it's fine for what it is. Keep up the good work!

[another friday thing]

I did not see that coming at all lmfao! Made me laugh hard I'll admit XD. Keep up the good work!

Kritts responds:

thank you lol

[GrubHub Ad Reanimated in FNaF]

Finally, a grubhub commercial that is not cringe. xD

[Lego and the sticky cookie(ep3)]

Pretty good stop motion going on here. Pretty fluid as it should be. As for the question, she may face off her greatest enemy yet: Karen. lol

KinkaBrick responds:

I don’t getting it