Did she ever get that pizza?
Did she ever get that pizza?
No sadly.
While the animation and art is decent enough, the voice acting could be amplified some. Especially when comparing that to the loud sound effects here. If you don't have Audacity, I strongly recommend it. It's free and it can help make the lines louder.
Thanks for the critique
The linework is pretty good, so I'll give you that. If you have to, look up royalty free music to put into the video so you won't have to worry about copyrights.
thanks for the feedback! i'll be making more stuff with royalty free music in the future to avoid this
While there is nothing wrong with the comic dub on its own, I feel like it'd be better off on YouTube than on Newgrounds as a movie. As a movie on here, there has to be more to it than just a slideshow of comic panels. Like having really cool transitions or something. With all that said, I do like the voice cast behind this. Everyone sounded like they were trying hard and having fun. Also the quality of the comic is really good too, so I'll give you that. :)
You look like someone who really knows what they're talking about! Could you give me some pointers? I'm always looking to improve :)
A lot of these old animations are pretty good quality. Makes me nostalgic for 2000s YouTube to where you could find "Stick Figures on Crack" animations on the frontpage. :)
Aaah fuck PivotmasterDX he stole peoples animations!
Ok that 009 Sound System shit made me laugh hard lmao! Really priceless. Really great quality animation btw. Keep up the good work! :)
Thank you so so much!!!
I will say the backgrounds in general could use a lot more work put into them. They are not really that appealing to look at. Aside from that, the animation is pretty decent and I like what you have going on here. Be sure to improve, and keep up the good work.
I will definitely improve on the backdrops in the future and thanks for your input!
In my opinion, this kind of video would be better off on YouTube than Newgrounds. On this site the quality has to be at least decent, and here it technically isn't. I could forgive it, but the topic of this video isn't really that interesting no offense. Since you're new here, I thought I give you some constructive feedback. Good luck with making animations.
Lol nothing you said was constructive, you just gave a negative opinion
The quality here is pretty bizarre but really cool. Is this some kind of deepfake rotoscoping?
Cheers it was rotoscoped using ebsynth, then once I edited I went over it again with flipa clip and animated the nose
Hope he aint too heavy. lol
Well he's called big for a reason
Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!
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