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ShaeGuy

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Although the art was good and all, there could've been more animation and face expressions into this. Just work harder, and you'll get it.

Where do I begin. You need to work on the animation, work on the art. And especially work on the voice acting. Half the time I can barely even make out what anybody is saying. Take the time to what I said, and improve.

For a 1st ever sprite animation, you did unbelievably well. Keep it up!

Amazing animation, artwork, voice acting, etc. Keep it up!

Pretty amazing. Made me laugh. Keep it up! :)

The text could have been on screen a lot longer than that, but this was pretty funny. lol

Kenamy responds:

oke
noted

Despite the bad audio, the animation keeps it entertaining. Keep it up!

InfidelBliss responds:

Yeah i know, the audio had lots of re processings making it really shitty
- youtube to mp3
-mp3 edited
-edited mp3 to flash
-flash to swf
-swf to aiv (swivel)
-aiv to mp4
and finally,
-mp4 to here
i do think i could solve the problem by using toon boom, getting voice actors and being less of a retard tho.

The storyboard and the idea was pretty funny. But you should have tried to finish this. Atleast work on it a couple hours a day, and you would see that this can get finished. Though this seemed like it could've been perfect, so I'll give you 3 stars.

LitPower responds:

I stopped working on this a year ago and my tablet broke, there was literally no reason for me to work on this anymore, especially since now I'm a YouTuber and I upload regularly there, so y'know, I was just going through my files and thought why not upload this for the sake of it lol :P

Seems ok for a 1st timer. Just work better on it, and you'll be pretty good.

Animoumou responds:

Thank you kind sir. :)

#1 You need to work on your animation.
#2 You need better voice acting (like maybe get a family member who can help you out or something).
#3 This video was too short.

Just some tips to help you out in the future.

Pretty much just an animator for fun! Hope you enjoy my content!

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